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February 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, that was just too much. Poor Iruka past out, Naruto's cluess as always, and Genma just step in it. That was good, I really enjoy reading it. Thanks.
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August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
I will just say "Please upload more chapters".
I will just say "Please upload more chapters".
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August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very funny ^____^
I can't wait to see what happens next :3
I can't wait to see what happens next :3
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June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i loved it. the whole thing just worked out so well. it was funny and original. so kudos! bye!
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was deliciously fun. So very very cute. I wish it was longer. God i love watching people fight over Iruka. It makes me all warm and fuzzy. In my opinion he should be totally clueless though. It's so much funnier when he has no idea how hot he is. And he is!!
cheers
Meg
cheers
Meg
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!
so funny :)
please, more!
so funny :)
please, more!
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O_O!!!!
....*THUD* *lying on the floor giggling*
The Naruto-Sakura interaction really helped the comedic tension build. "You don't want THAT cookie!" XD
"How is anyone supposed to know you wanted it?"
"I looked at it."
...RIGHT, Kakashi. Right. And then... Genma... *just GIGGLES* Perfect.
....*THUD* *lying on the floor giggling*
The Naruto-Sakura interaction really helped the comedic tension build. "You don't want THAT cookie!" XD
"How is anyone supposed to know you wanted it?"
"I looked at it."
...RIGHT, Kakashi. Right. And then... Genma... *just GIGGLES* Perfect.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That was too much. Loved the Sakura and Naruto part . . . cymbal? LOL! Those two fighting over Iruka's cookies and Genma coming in and taking it too much. Thanks for sharing it.
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April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
super cute! i like the hidden meanings behind all the cookie and heart how tenzou and kakashi are fighting over the cookie. it's great to see that iruka picked up on it too. and naruto was too cute for words! i hope there will be another part to this to end the cookie wars. =P thank you for sharing!
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April 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
interesting start. poor Iruka