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by Laurachan

schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's really good! I'm dying to read part 2. lol
person Anon
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cute but a little on the sappy side
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't remember if I reviewed this over at FF.net, so I'm gonna do it here! As always, it's a great story. I don't think I've ever read anything you've written and not enjoyed it!
person jo
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
kawaii!! love it so far!
person Cyberdark
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Despite english not being your first language, your diction and spelling are excellent. Your story is captivating and funny all at the same time. Can't wait to see the 2nd half.