rate_review Reviews

Well..that last chapter was..interesting?

The dick slapping was all funny and stuff but I'm not so sure it really fits with the rest of the story. I do find it alittle off track with the the previous chapters. It may just be because I'm not really a HakuxNaruto fan. Don't think I'm flaming you or being mean or anything I just thought I should tell you what I think. I'm starting to get a little lost and I'm not quite sure where your going with this story anymore. Well, hopefully you don't hate me now. You can just ignore me if you like. Whatever floats your boat!

Dick slapping? Kocoum, you deviant you...

great story!
Haku is cheating on kiba? naruto has wet dreams of sasuke? I can't wait to read more!
please continue!

Well damn. Haku's a promiscuous little thing, isn't he? ^^


hehe. Keep up the good work!

I know it's prolly not in the handbook to review the story I've beta'd, but I loved this chapter, so what the hell.

I liked the Naru/Haku bit at the end, too - came as a total surprise, but a good one. That pairing's sort of grown on me... 0-o In this story anyway. :D

Looking forward to the next, (and more Kiba action, he was woefully absent this time around) and much love,

Ella with an A.

So basically, Naruto and Sasuke are fighting as a form of foreplay, ne?

Fair enough. When do they finally quit playing and get down to business? Hate sex has got to be as much fun to write as it is to read. I'm loving the buildup here--the ultimate hate sex promises to be so intense it leaves a mushroom cloud in the atmosphere. When do we get to read it?

Next chapter please!!!!!

Well, I think this was amazing -- to be quite frank. Your sense of humour rocks (there are so many lines here that made me roar with laughter) and your characterization is spot-on. I don't think I've ever seen such a well-written Naruto before; he's rude, hot-headed and perfect. I love how he and Sasuke just fight and can't keep their hands off each other -- the tension is thick and I think I'll die when they get together in this fic.

Your Sasuke is love as well. He's just as bitchy, prissy and stuck up like I expected him to be. The Itachi-Sasuke interactions were priceless, so far. I can't even begin to tell you how much your Itachi amused me.

You also have a very nice way of writing; your style is easy and pleasant to read, but also paints a clear picture. Your writing flows too and overall, I'm just in love with how enjoyable this fic is.

Haha! This story is great! So many good things could happen. Can't wait for the next chapter.
BTW, if your still in need of a BETA, I'm available. I'm a total english grammar spazz.
masquerade1015450@yahoo.com

How could you leave it there?!

Please continue!

man naruto and sasukes parents are nice if i wou;d've gotten suspended from school for 5 days becuase of i fight i would've died......lucky people.....
i can't wait to find out what happens to them at the library metting.....
and what was up with sasuke waking up with mornign wood....was that a natural thing or did he have it cause of someone?