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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is going to turn out to be a very fun story!
I'll be waiting for an update.
I'll be waiting for an update.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
well, shit is right. lol. looking foward to your next update.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So...are they going to take their celebrity death match to the library this time?
Please update.
Please update.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has an adorable feeling to it. I hope that you continue this story and update soon.
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really am interested in where this is going. Please do update soon!
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This needs SO much more love than it's gotten.
Seriously. The amount of side splitting one liners in the first chapter alone should have told me something. But the second one clinched it. "Maybe a good walk and some fresh air would do some good rather than sitting on my ass, watching porn, eating and destroying my godly physique." THAT! THAT RIGHT THERE. Pure genius is what I've deemed it.
And I still can't get "he'll have your nipples for dessert" out of my mind. Nyehhehe...
Uhm. But yeah. Other than that, I love the flow you've got going and your Naruto characterization is spot on (though I was a bit surprised to see Minato-baby was still kickin'...) and the title! The title makes me gush like a schoolgirl. Don't ask me why, I'm a bit demented like that.
And I'd love to beta for you. I usually don't accept beta requests, but um, this time... I just want to be able to read the chapter first. (I know, sneaky, right? Prolly would've been sneakier if I hadn't told you though...) So if you're still looking, you can check out my stories to see if I'm worthy. :P My email is bleepbloopbanana at gmail.
Much love, and looking forward to mooooaaaar!
Ella
Seriously. The amount of side splitting one liners in the first chapter alone should have told me something. But the second one clinched it. "Maybe a good walk and some fresh air would do some good rather than sitting on my ass, watching porn, eating and destroying my godly physique." THAT! THAT RIGHT THERE. Pure genius is what I've deemed it.
And I still can't get "he'll have your nipples for dessert" out of my mind. Nyehhehe...
Uhm. But yeah. Other than that, I love the flow you've got going and your Naruto characterization is spot on (though I was a bit surprised to see Minato-baby was still kickin'...) and the title! The title makes me gush like a schoolgirl. Don't ask me why, I'm a bit demented like that.
And I'd love to beta for you. I usually don't accept beta requests, but um, this time... I just want to be able to read the chapter first. (I know, sneaky, right? Prolly would've been sneakier if I hadn't told you though...) So if you're still looking, you can check out my stories to see if I'm worthy. :P My email is bleepbloopbanana at gmail.
Much love, and looking forward to mooooaaaar!
Ella
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I won't mind becoming your beta! XD, email me-
ally82894@aol.com
-if you decide to take up the offer!
ally82894@aol.com
-if you decide to take up the offer!
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April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Laughing hard* And this is the awesomeness of Kocoum! I absolutely love the way you end your chapters. Good work on chapter two....Now where is three! LOL. Just joking. I do look forward to reading your next update though. *Snickers* "Well, shit."
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April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
CONTINUE, please. :]
I really enjoyed the dialogue throughout your story, it pretty much flowed.
Yaay.
I really enjoyed the dialogue throughout your story, it pretty much flowed.
Yaay.
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!!I love it, so funny! And I'm glad you're not dead and writing again :) Ganbatte!