rate_review Reviews

I am in the process of reading both fics, 'Violate Me' and 'So Natural' side by side to get a sense of the story and the moments when one scene switches from one to the other.

It's pure brilliance. You write well, conveying the emotions of both couples and their combining stories of growing interest in each other.

And both couples are favorites of mine. OTPs to be more precise. And to find both couples combined and staring their own stories... You have absolutely made my night/day.

I'm a bow before your utter awesomeness as a writer and the feelings you have left us readers with. You did leave the ending rather open, as you said you meant to, and I liked it as I had no trouble imagining just exactly what they did do...

More than a few times.

Again, thank you for this and I shall certainly go to see the third part, finishing reviewing the first part and secretly hope for more fics of these two couples from you.

Keep up the awesome writing.

It was a nice change to see Shino not be pigeonholed as the 'creepy bug guy' or gay.
And Sakura poking at Kiba and saying, "So much protein" made me choke on my tea! Drunk Sakura was too funny!

I hope you find time to write another story (although it looks like you are studying medicine, and are probably very busy!)

Thanks for sharing!

I just love this fic!!! I prefer Sakura and Shino and Kiba and Ino for some reason, but it worked anyway...very well I might add. Just the simple fact that you did not portray these two male Shinobi as GAY, like almost everyone else does, did it for me. I love the way you depict both Kiba and Shino...HOT!!!
To be honest, I love any fic (Male/Female) with the Aburame in it, and I've always said and noticed, that there are far to few fics with either Shino or Kiba...unless they are gay! So, I will follow your writings and those of other very few authors that have Shino or Kiba in them as straight guys.

Awesome fic! Really steamy, just like I like them!!! BRAVO!!!!

OH MY GAWD!!! hehe all 5 parts simply amazing!! Another Fic induced Orgasm by Southern Cross phew you kill my libido lol. I LOVED it I am now a Shino/Ino fan but I doubt anybody can live up to that phew that's freaking sexy. The whole thing is soo detailed and the plot was great too I really hope you decide to make a longer fic any pairing you decide to do I know I'll love but longer with mucho plot I can wait for sex for a very long time lol you proved your really good at plot and subtle yet blatant humor as well so I'll be waiting eagerly for when you have a idea for a full fleged story! In the mean time I'll be rocking in the corner for my fic of Violat Me 2 lol The Ice Jack puts ideas in my head lol can't wait

Loves Arry

that certain gadget "fleshlight" good one man that was priceless
i saw it coming from a mile away though cause i've given one to a friend last year
very original for the storry and your right nothing replaces the real thing

5 out of 5
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I really love this story--you never see this pairing! Please continue and update soon!

This was really enjoyable to read, you made it fun to read about this pairing! Thanks for sharing this story and all the fast updates.

That was very HOT!! Great job.
Rox

Oh no, I knew that Shino liked Ino! :D I was just being somewhat sarcastic when I reviewed...sarcasm doesn't come off very well in text.

I apologize for that earlier review...I reread it later and realized how incredibly unlike me it sounds. I must have been having a bi-polar moment. For me, Violate Me seemed (I wish I could italicize that) like a sexcapade (not that there's anything wrong with that!); I apologize if that was not what you intended. There just seemed (again, italicize) to be more substance here. Or it could just be the Shino-Ino fangirl in me - I never see enough of this pairing. Again, many apologies. I really enjoyed this last chapter.

hey, i like how you have written the characters' personalities, also, the smut scenes are graphic!
so, i hope that you Update soon! Poor Ino and the Dammed Cliff Ending Heartbreak... or is it?