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April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have no idea if you check the comments on old stories, but I'll leave one regardless. I about fell off my bed when I read the last chapter.
"I don't think so, but I think we ought to wait. Telling him he's going to have another little sibling who will also be his niece or nephew might be a bit much for him..." - oh god oh god oh god...
'So in the end, everyone lived fairly happily ever after except for Tenpi because he still got wigged out with the fact that his mother married his half brother. But who said everyone always got their perfect ending?' - AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!
You are so twisted!!!! Your scary little mind is the GREATEST!!!!!!!
"I don't think so, but I think we ought to wait. Telling him he's going to have another little sibling who will also be his niece or nephew might be a bit much for him..." - oh god oh god oh god...
'So in the end, everyone lived fairly happily ever after except for Tenpi because he still got wigged out with the fact that his mother married his half brother. But who said everyone always got their perfect ending?' - AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAH!
You are so twisted!!!! Your scary little mind is the GREATEST!!!!!!!
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September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bwa ha ha ha! Poor Tenpi! His mom... married his half brother... i am dying so much! This is freaking hilarious!
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June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like the story creative lots of detail but the epilogne.... YOU DONT MARRY THE KID YOU GAVE BIRTH TO EVEN IF THE NIOT BIOLOGICLY RELATED ITS JUST WRONG, NOT TO MENTION THEIR WHAT 20 TO 25 YEARS APPART AGAIN WRONG.
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February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. I have never thought that Sasuke could be so obssesed. Though I am curious what would happen if Kishimoto wrote something like this :)
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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
amazing story and a great, if unexpected ending.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG the ending is something I did not expect, but I still loved it and I feel sorry for poor Tenpi. Thank you for this story I enjoyed it.
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September 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a weird ending! :D I am glad though that Sasuke and Naruto ended up happily together. Thank you so much for sharing this story! :)
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September 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg D: i totally was not expecting this type of ending.
I can't believe I'm saying this, but I wanted it to be SUPER ANGSTY..~! uwahhah
I can't believe I'm saying this, but I wanted it to be SUPER ANGSTY..~! uwahhah
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wahaahahaha!! Okay, I'm a little horrified with the incestuous love. Yes, yes, they're not biologically related, but he's still her adopted son, isn't he? Oh well, as long as she's happy, right? But, uh, overall I enjoyed this story very much and I'm glad you finished it! Thanks for writing. ♥
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yes! It's complete! I went away for the summer and never had time to check up on this story. There wasn't one day when I didn't think about this story. I'm so glad I'm home, now I can catch up on all the stories I love. When I left I think you were on chapter 17. So I'm elated that it's done. And I love it! I really wasn't expecting that at the end. You know, the whole thing with Kitsu and Hinata. If I were Tenpi I'd be more than freaked out. I feel sorry for him. But he'll get over it just as I have! It's really funny now that I think about. LOL! Thanks so much for such a wondreful story. Oh, I almost forgot, Sasuke has some serious problems. He needs help. LOL!
Ja!
Ja!