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by Jelp

schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Naruto and Sakura seem to be at an end. o_o Sakura was really getting out of hand. The pressure of knowing (or thinking she knows) that her 2nd prize husband was sleeping with the person she gave up her one true love for must have made her snap!

Of course, if Sasuke and Hinata tell Naruto now that Sakura was half right and the children were really his all along... that might not go well either. The two of them would be indirectly responsible for breaking up his marriage! (Not that that wasn't what they intended eventually, but still!) Although things might get interesting when Sakura goes to file for a divorce and finds she's got an additional husband and wife. :x


Keep up the great work! :D
person TFizzle
schedule June 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say to Sakura is Yaaah-Bitch-Yaaah!!!!
This is turning into the best soap opera fic that
I have ever read and I love it!!!!!!Keep it coming
Jelp,you are a true master of storytelling......
person mango
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was good~! you always have appropriate titles lol <3
person mls1971
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter!! Poor Naruto is so hurt and it's too bad that it's Sasuke's fault. But Naruto and Sakura aren't right together so I guess it's better that Naruto had to learn this the hard way. I can't wait until the next chapter, that according to the title is about Naruto learning the truth, right? It's going to be a sad chapter though, isn't it?
person lily
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hi! I have taken a long time to review, but here I'm!! OMG! Sakura finally notice the marks. She was really being a ***ch poor Hinata, she has to put out with her. I gets me made every time Sakura hits Naru-chan. She sooo mean. I want her dead* lol great chap!

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lily
person Lily
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Why Sakura is sooo jealous! I mean she has a reason, but she should be jealous of Sasuke not hinata. I
wonder what would she do if she gets to know that naru almost kiss Sasuke twice! she would be sooo angry! I'm so happy for hinata. she got that cute letter, but at the same time i'm sad for sasuke because you could tell that naruto really liked (or still does) hinata. this was a good chap! great job!

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Lily
person Lily
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto, that sakura is soo mean to him. I t was really sad that he miss the birthday party of the quads(his kids) it was all sakura's fault! For what? if later on she went to drink and left naruto all along! The letter that naruto wrote to sasuke really confuse me. what does it mean? does he loves him or not? I dying of curiousity! I defenetely hate sakura! thanks for the update! I think you are doing a great job, so if you are 1 or 3 day late, that would really matter, because I know that you will update sooner or later. You have been really good to us (readers)and I love this fic. I would be ok with waiting. ^_^ great chap.

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Lily ^_^
person Lily
schedule June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!WOW I honestely didn't expect that at all!!! At the begining I was really mad a Sakura for 1) brought up the conversation like that to poor Hinata, 2) She was fighting in front of the babies.(They are kids and should be present that type of conversations)3) she SLAP! Hinata!! for no reason!!!, 4) She almost HIT one of the KIDS!!! I was really grateful that someone hit her at the time, but I went on shock mode when I notice it had been NARUTO!! I was like WHAT? WHAT JUST HAPPEN!? I think i looked the same or worse than Sasuke and Hinata lol. Can't difenetely wait 'til saturday!!! it gone be soooo goood!!! this was the greatess chapter so far! I really love it(Now I understand what you meant that this and the next one are one of you favorites chap!) awesome job! ^_^

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Lily
person KibaNaru
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP! HOLY CRAP! HOLY CRAP! HOLY CRAP! That was an AWSOME chapter! And then you tell us the title of the next one, OMG!!! I can't beleive Sakura would even THINK of hitting a bady, she really deserved that! I agree full heartedly with Sasuke and the baby; BITCH!!! I can't fucking wait for the next chapter!