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by Jelp

schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Post up the rest dont leave us in suspence! C'mon!...C'MON!!!!
person Ivy
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very dramatic. This chapter rocked! Sakura deserved that hit...too bad Naruto feels guilty for it. Can't wait for the next chapter :-)
person littleolmee
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well thank you Jelp's friend for lending her the use of your computer so she could post. First reaction to the latest chapter is: What the hell is wrong with that bitch? I can see Naruto standing up for the babies, I mean he is with them so much plus his character is one to protect others; especially those who can't protect themselves. How much more can Naruto and Sakura's relationship survive? I mean I can tell he is really sorry about hitting her but really it's like they are at a crossroad in how things will be. I can understand the pain Sakura is feeling thinking her husband has cheated on her. But either she has to give up on that pain and accept her husband at his word or their relationship is over. I'm not sure how this obvious choosing of sides by Naruto will affect Sakura and their relationship. Being they are ninjas I don't know how much the idea of him striking her will be a problem; being they spar and would hit one another, but I would think it would be probably seen as a defection in a way; Naruto defecting from the special relationship she and he would share as husband and wife, Naruto has basically made the choice that the babies, Sasuke, and Hinata was more important than she was. That has to hurt her and make her want to end the relationship. In a way it helps Sasuke in his want to be with Naruto, if Sakura is out of the picture making some progress on him and Naruto being together if he can convince him that Hinata doesn't mind . . . or including him in their marriage . I can't wait to see what happens. Will Naruto have a depression from this? How will he react? I'm sure he will try to salvage things with Sakura but what will she do to him in return? He might end up in the hospital. In the previous chapter it was said that Sakura had been spending a lot of time with Ino. Does this have anything to do with her not given up on that the babies aren't Sasuke's? Has Sakura been looking for another person to be with since she and Naruto have had problems since basically they got married? Well the story is really coming a long wonderfully. Can't wait to read more as always. Thank you for the update. Take care.

littleolmee
person Akiko
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aahhhh the tension!! I just realised that I was holding my breath when I finished the last sentence. Keep going! Can't wait for what is about to happen next!

Greetings from Germany
Aki
person k
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That should be the last straw for Naruto when Sakura tried to hit 1 of the baby.
When Naruto hit her I was jumping for joy. I hope we don't have to wait too long to see Naruto chuck her out.
person Gwyllion
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN!!! Sakura deserved that puch so bad! And much more in my own opinion. She def needed to be shown her place. I'm kind of glad this happened, but now the tension is rising. Hope all will come out alright. Especially with Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. Great job in this. I was on the edge of my seat! :D
person Allys
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! I almost kinda wish that Naruto had hit her for hitting on him... but we both know that would have never happened. But damn that bitch seriously lost her mind. First off, she hit Hinata. Hinata. Then she tried to hit the baby. Yeah I saw that punch coming from a mile away but I seriously thought it was gonna be Sasuke. I'm so freaking happy it was Naruto. And the hugs and baby pile afterward was adorable. It was like solace. I love that his babies sooth his soul. And omg XD. Sasuke made me want to glomp him all through this chapter ('and this one is Naato' XD). Not to mention his reaction to Sakura hitting his wife. That was priceless. I'm so happy he's warming up to Hinata, LOL, I'm just so happy right now. Gods *HUGS U* XD. And the name of the next chapter is just adding to my joy XD. AT LAST!!!! (cue the violins) ~My love has come along, my lonely days are over and life is like a song ~XD I'm so freaking happy!! I can't wait!!! LOL, Saturday Hurry the hell up!!!
person Raineko
schedule June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. But that part with Sasuke and his clone...ew. Just the thought of that is sick. How far did he go? He can not be that desperate.
person Rhionae
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Out of curiosity - what's happened with Hanabi since the twin's birth?
person mango
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oooh i like this story the more i read it <3 it's so nice and sweet :)