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Damn, not much happened in this chapter I couldn't guess would happen. Oh well, I liked it all the same. I can't wait to read more!

LOL, Ah I was excited anyway, but you being excited too makes me even more excited!! XD *Glomps u* I can see the light at the end of the tunnel!!!! XD LOL, So happy!

I'm really sorry that Sakura's being a bitch to Naruto though. It's hurtful and OMFG!! I really want to kick Neji's ass. What the Hell!! I mean yeah we know you prefer Naruto be with Hinata. And yes I can even understand the jibes, but to outright lie and then to do that to the cake at a Public birthday party. That's really messed up and shameful. If I was Sasuke I would have "accidentally" dropped the cake in his face. HARD. "Oh my god! It slipped." Didn't know things could fall up and then sideways did ya. I mean yeah they are Naruto's, but he doesn't know that. This is his cousin, her family and her good name. His good fucking name. Urrgh. Sorry that just seriously riled me up. Almost as bad as the thought of fucking Sakura making Naruto miss the quads 1st birthday party and then sleep on the goddamn couch and she's not even in the fucking house. What the Hell! Stupid Bitch! Don't think for a minute that I believe you're somewhere with Ino. Pull your damn outside man out of which ever damn closet you stuffed him in so I can kick his ass too. *grumbles*

On a happy note. I'm really pleased with how well Sasuke and Hinata are getting along. And the twins can TALK!!! Awwww!! They're big enough to be seriously cute at this point. LMAO Seiryuu's first word was shit XD *snickers* and Tenpi!! I would glomp him if it wouldn't hurt him. Way too adorable!! XD. I can't wait until they're a real family. I love that Naruto sort of already feels that they are :D. Oh and I really loved Naruto's letter! It's so perfectly 12 year old Naruto. And it says so damn much without meaning to at all. *loves on you and your genius* Thank you so much for the update. Yesterday when I didn't see it I thought for a moment that you had gotten so distracted by Mine that you had forgotten. I was really freaking sad. But you made it all better. *Huggles*

AH! It was a day late! Anyways, loved the chapter. I look forward to the Naruto/Sasuke interactions, and I can't wait to see what you have cooking for the two in the future.

I really like the story. It's similar to "Mine" but nicer and not that angsty. Sakura abusing Naruto is scary, and what is even more scary is that Sasuke thinks that telling her that Naruto does not like it would stop her from doing it. I mean, who would think that he likes it?

It would be neat if Sakura was having an affair with Ino and then left Naruto for Ino! Sasuke would sure grab him up! :D Thanks for the new chapter!

I love it! I am a big fan of Hinata. Even though I love Sasuke and Naruto together best, I have always had a bit of a soft spot for her. The idea of all three of them together is great! And even though it seemed a little odd at first, Sasuke and Hinata definitely make an attractive couple. Perhaps you could work towards a true menage a trois? Not like I expect Sasuke to go straight for Hinata, but maybe they could exchange some kisses and casual embraces. She is, after all, his babies' momma. Hahaha And I can't quite see Naruto being completely happy, even panting and sandwiched between Hinata and Sasuke, if Hinata isn't being lovingly caressed a bit by BOTH her husbands, hoho. >:3 Plus I bet Neji, if not lots of people, might find it suspicious if Hinata and Sasuke are never seen kissing or being physically affectionate.

A good way for Sasuke to sort of get everything out there might be to just tell Naruto, "I'm in love with you." Tell him of course he wants to be with Hinata, of course he loves his children, blah blah but he loves Naruto, too, so what is Naruto going to do about it? Or maybe Sasuke should go to Ino. If anyone has the dirt on Sakura's marriage troubles, it would be her! Plus Ino like Sasuke, and has an old habit of trying to make Sakura look bad in front of Sasuke, so he could probably convince her to spill information. Buuuut, you've already written this story, right? So my suggestions aren't going to have much of an impact. Oh well. Wonderful job and I look forward to the next update.

loved the new chapter!!! can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!

Awww...Naruto cares for Hinata! ^.^ I knew it! Sakura is such a bitch! What the hell is her problem!? Awesome chapter! Update soon!

XD *Beams Happily* AWWWWW!!!!! That was a lovely letter!! It was way too sweet and I adored Sasuke's reaction!! I'm so happy he gave the letter to Hinata XD. I'm totally dying to read what Naruto wrote to him at that particular crazy point in time. *huggles u* I'm loving regular updates!! *happy dances*. The idea of them dying the quads cheeks is adorable. Although I wish they didn't have to :(. When are they gonna tell Naruto *puppy dog eyes* lol I can't wait!! ♥

The very idea alone of Naruto's unsent personal letters to people as he was isolated from Konoha on his training mission with Jiraiya speaks volumes about him. I loved what you wrote in his letter to Hinata and Hinata's response upon reading it. Sakura is going to screw things up in her relationship all on her own without the help from Sasuke. Good thing there are two others waiting in the wings to pick up the pieces, eh? ^^


Keep up the good work!