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Poor Sasuke has been so busy with being a daddy and trying to keep it a secret about the babies parentage that he hasn't got to do much to try to win Naruto. I can't wait to see what Naruto wrote to Sasuke either! Thanks for the new chapter! :)

I hope he gets to read the letter, and I hope he finds more meanning in it than Sakura. Can't wait to read more!

At first I thought this was going to be some set-up letter written by Neji to pull off as Naruto flattering her (so that Sakura will break off with Naruto and possibly venture toward being a part of Hinata’s family which in kind of words is as close to being with Hinata despite everyone believing she’s only married to Sasuke). But then it was clear that Naruto had written it a long time ago and I do understand what Sasuke was talking about, that Naruto wasn’t saying he loved Hinata, but greatly appreciated her support and friendship with him through all these passing years. Oh and the little moment between Seiryuu and Kitsu was funny as well to me. I love it how Sasuke’s acting all maternal toward his babies, always desiring to hold his children as would any first-time parent that becomes overly possessive of what is clearly theirs. The next chapter does sound very intriguing and I have a feeling it has to do with Sakura and Naruto’s relationship. Plus, I guess chapter 15 of Mine will be coming out anytime this week, huh? You left it on such an intense cliff hanger! Even though you said it will be an okay happy ending in a way, I am fearful just a bit of what will happen. Poor Sasuke. I really like the kind of character you give Sasuke in all your stories –not out of character at all and an interesting view of what he would be like when older and finally living a happy life. Thanks for the update, Jelp!

~SasuNaru~

I liked how open Sasuke and Hinata are toward each other. It makes sense, I mean, the secrets wouldn't work if they didn't, but even something like the letter and Sasuke still presented it to Hinata for her opinion. I'm glad.
I kinda missed Naruto in this one. Little ray of sunshine that he is. Thanks for the update.

gah i just love this story so much. i never know what will happen next and that's what makes all your stories so damn awesome. please update soon. can't wait!

i really like where this story is going and i luv the constant updates but i really can't wait for some sasunaru action again, hopefully with some feeling, hope we get to see the letter naruto wrote to sasuke and sakura :P

Hmm.... Sakura's got a keen eye. Good thing Sasuke's a crafty bastard when it comes to quick lies.


Although offering Sakura the opportunity to be part of their actual marriage was very generous of him.

Thanks for the new chapter! It was funny how Sasuke thought up an idea on where the whisker marks came from and Sakura bought it, even though it was lame. :D

(rises hand meekly...can Sasuke just do a genjutsu on her instead of making up some ...how to put it..."poor"? excuse? just asking,sorry i really did like the chapter though it maked me wonder about his lacking of sharingan use...
great job^^

I want Sakura out of the picture so badly.
Does Naruto know that little info about Sakura?