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by Jelp

schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Seriously... you are killing me.
I adore Sasuke to pieces. And Naruto... sighs contently. And even little Hinata... whom I secretly love. But, why can't you choose! Sakura... bitch? Not so bitch?
Each chapter I start out with the benefit of the doubt. Maybe she can work herself into the family although honestly, even though I love Hinata... We are talking about Sasuke and Naruto... SASUKE and NARUTO... the hearts in my eyes make typing damn near impossible. Shakes head... FOCUS! Okay, so I'm thinking they could all be one big happy family (with certain amounts of 'special' alone time for my boys) and then she goes all freaky Jason on Sasuke... and yes, I get that she is right, but she doesn't know that... anyway... Then you have her soften up... then you have her HIT Naruto... damn, she is abusive! I can see why Sasuke gets all angry. And even while I'm sharpening my pitch fork you make her talk all sweet about Naruto and how he knows she can't have kids... And then, as I'm putting the pitch fork back into the shed you have her mention her obsession with Sasuke.
That's it... I don't even know what the hell I'm doing with the pitch fork anymore. So dizzy... feeling light headed... ALL YOUR FAULT!
That said... loving the story, loving you (in a non-stalkerish, but I do carry a pitchfork kinda way.)
Looking forward to the next.
person Allys
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww *huggles Naruto*. He's so freaking cute XD. And I love how Sasuke is getting all defensive of all the babies. I really do want them to all be happy together. It was really sweet and big of him to extend the invitation to Sakura as well (I'm so proud XD). Lol, they're all adorable. I can't wait until the babies are old enough to have personalities XD. I think it'll be great fun. But really did Sakura have to hit him :s... *grumbles*. Still trying not to hate her. Still somewhat failing. *sighs and Loves on you for updating* Thank you. I love that you got it out despite real world intervention. I know how that can be *hugs u*.
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was awesome, I loved it! This fic is now one of my favorite ones, and that makes you one of my favorite authors! So keep up with the good work! Take care. Hugs
person KibaNaru
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
He thinks he's in trouble? I know he's in trouble! Lol. I can't wait to read more. This story is very interesting. Though I did find Sasuke's excuse for the whiskers rather bad ... Anyway, UPDATE SOON!!! X3
person xnamikazex
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this is getting so good. I can't even guess anymore what you have planned next!
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope no one else notices the babies resemblance to Naruto! When will everything start to come together?! Like the fact that they are all married?! Please more soon!
person Qinni
schedule June 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i agree with sasuke being a bit out of character xD;;~ he's a bit...too mental @_@;;~ xD;; but...MOAR (sasunaru) SEX PLZ? lol, xDDD~ it's good though, will be back to check every week to see how it goes =3~ very interesting read <3~ keep up the good work~!
person DarkClaw
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying this story and that I hope you update soon ^.^
person mango
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i wonder if the babies have similar chakras as their parents? ahh just more questions the more i read~! @_@
person Allys
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhh!!! I can't decide if I wanted Sasuke to tell him or not. *pouts* XD Oh well. I love that the marks are getting darker. And Naruto would be innocent enough to just blurt it out in the middle of ceremony :). Neji makes me nervous in this story though.And Neji knowing is definitely making me nervous. Although if the marks keep getting darker then it was definitely only a matter of time. Hinata already needs a big hug without Neji stirring up trouble. And omg I can't believe I'm about to say this, but, I sort of wish Hinata was involved more. With Sasuke as well as with Naruto. I want them all to be a happy family together without anybody feeling left out. Although in the same breath I can honestly say that I don't really want Sakura involved at all. *sighs* So complicated. I think I'm just gonna focus on the easier good stuff. Like Sasuke parading around naked for a blushing Naruto XD *Glomps u and loves all over*