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Naruto wants Sasuke to kiss him!! I can feel it! kiss,kiss,kiss!! I slap my forhead for sasuke when naruto notice that one of the baby have his marks in the cheeks and I coulnd't stop laughing when he point out that the other one had them too. lol This chap was soo funny. there was a lot of suspense. I though sasuke was going to tell naruto about everything!! I'm looking forward to Naruto's reaction when he finally learns that those are his kids too. It's gone be great. Awesome chap. Keep up the good job. I can't wait for saturday!! It's one day away, but it seen like a week instead. see ya next chap. ^_^

hug&kisses

Lily

thank you jelp for this story!!!!
Naruto is so oblivious it hurts!!! When he blurted out in front of everyone that seiryu had whisker marks JUST LIKE HIS I was like 'shut the hell up Naruto, YOU MORON!!!!'... It was hilarious, i really loved that scene!
And Sasuke saved the day, thank god!
Well, Naruto isn't so oblivious it seems, he really did see some resemblance between him and the quads, maybe he can feel it in his guts that they are his?
I wonder what Hinata said to distract Neji!! He surely started to question her after Naruto's stupid remark. I wonder why he wants so much to see Hinata and Naruto together, of course he cares for his cousin but still... Neji isn't gonna leave Sasuke alone after this, right? Maybe he will want to confirm Naruto is the father of the quads by running a blood test, thus going to Sakura and creating BIG problems for Hinata and Sasuke!!!
I love this story !

Next chapter must have some of Sakura in it since it's called Green Eyes of Jealousy. Sasuke should realize how upset Naruto will be when he finds out that Sasuke has kept the truth about his children from him. Even if Naruto still thinks he loves only Sakura, he should be told the truth soon. Also, it would be nice to see Naruto's thoughts about everything since the story seems to be only from Sasuke's perspective, it's kind of hard to know what Naruto's real feelings for Sasuke are. Will we get to see some of what's happening between Naruto and Sakura in the next chapter?

Okay, I don't usually like SasuNaru, or preg stories, but I like this one. Sasuke is totally insane though, lol. He was more than correct in assuming his obsession was "un-healthy". I can just imagine the conversation when he tells Naruto:
Sasuke: "Naruto, I love you, I want to be with you, and I've had Hinata bear our children. Now you HAVE to be with me, they’re your children too. Do you want to see the shrine I've made for you in the closet? I've collected some toe-nails and hair from your trash and placed them all around this photo of you. Oh, by the way, we are legally married."
Naruto: "TEME!?!?!"
lol! Anyway, I like it. Can't wait to read more!
X3

Green eyes of jealousy??? Something tells me that Sakura is going to have some problems with how much time Naruto spends over at the Hyuuga compound. :P


Great chapter. I loved how Sasuke and Hinata were worrying over the whisker marks and how Naruto just blew up their spot in front of everybody. Neji's going to get inquisitive. Hmm...
Keep up the good worK!

I LOVE you Jelp, LOVE you! Was that enough leaving of love for ya? *LOL* Great update, I think its wonderful that they are using the names Naruto came up with for the children. Of course Naruto would notice the whisker marks and be the one to point it out and of course he'd point it out to Neiji. Hmm, what will Neiji do with the information? Bring Sakura in on it? What are Sakura's feelings anyway? Why is she working at the hospital at night so much? You'd think a newly wed wouldn't want to work such hours and try to get out of them. Are things not all peaches and cream with Sakura and Naruto's relationship? What does Sakura feel with Naruto spending so much time with the babies? I'm sure he talks about them to her. Well can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for the update.

Gah! I love this story. When I first started reading it, I thought it made Sasuke sound insane, and I didn't want to get the angst of him 'hurting Naruto really bad'. But, I pushed myself through the first couple chapters, and now it's great! Naruto is perfectly in character, and I am really bad at reviews!

Oh dear...Naruto and his big mouth...le sigh. Thanks for updating! I lved the little scene after they woke up. It seems to me that Naruto has some repressed feelings...I think for hinata too! But we shall see!

I loved this chapter. I absolutely adore how you made Naruto use his shadow clones. He would totally be the perfect for multiples XD. And Sasuke crying just made me grin like fool XD. It was really nice to just see him happy. Happiness doesn't really seem to be in the cards for him in the manga does it *sighs*, so not thinking about that. I also really like the names of the babies. I had this wonderful thought of Naruto waking up and saying, Oi bastard, I'm not your wife XD. I almost freaked when Sasuke saw the whisker marks though. Those are gonna be terribly hard to explain, and I'm nervous about it, but still really excited!! LOL, Tuesday needs to hurry up and come XD. Thanks for giving me the days by the way, in case I haven't told you already.

blonde hair is a recessive trait afterall~ though it would make a bit of sense if the babies had light brown hair like other half white half asian do.