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YAY! BABIES! *squees* I love babies. Chibi Sasukes and Narutos! And Hinatas of course.. And NO Sakuras ^.^ I cant wait for the next chapter. Although...Im wondering whether or not Hinata is going to tell her father and Neiji that they are Naruto's babies...

Hmm, I really like your stories, and your writing in general, but I don't think you give Sasuke enough credit. Sure, he's a little pyscho and (a lot) obsessive, but he has an admirable honor ingrained in his personality, don't you think? I didn't find it very believable that Sasuke decided to rape Naruto. If anything, I would think his pride wouldn't allow him let Naruto not remember their first time. Haha, maybe Sasuke would be better off putting Naruto in a genjutsu where Naruto kisses Sasuke, just to see if Naruto freaked when he woke up or was just embarrassed. Anyway, I look forward to your next update. :)

I'm glad Sasuke felt remorse by the end of this chapter. Although he's sure going to have some explaining to do when they break the news to him that Naruto will be a father. Hmm... I wonder if Naruto was partially aware during the experience?

Very interesting premise! Great read.

The passion you formed in this chapter was AMAZING!! Although, having Sasuke AND Naruto interacting together in foreplay (rather than having Sasuke use genjutsu on Naruto and create an illusion) would be so much hotter. Anyhoo, great chapter, Jelp! I’m looking forward to the babies (or baby) which will probably come into play within a few more chapters (and also looking forward to reading Naruto’s reaction when he finds out who the parents of the baby(ies)) are. Happy to hear you have your Microsoft Word back up and running. In fact, I did something like that a year ago, but instead I had somehow uninstalled my CD/DVD Hard drive. I panicked and was worried I’d never get it reinstalled (plus my computer wasn’t reading discs), but eventually minutes later I rummaged around my computer’s options and was able to reinstall my CD/DVD Hard drive. But what a scare! I know just how you felt in that sort of situation. In the meantime till Saturday, have a wonderful week! ^_^

~SasuNaru723~

I don't necessarily like this interpretation of Sasuke (he's weird, but not that weird). I mean everyone's entitled to their opinion but I just couldn't see the real Sasuke acting that crazy but that's why it's called "creative" writing right! Well, all and all it's a pretty decent (ok not really) story. Keep up the good work! *I just hope this ends well*

Awww...Sasuke is so cute. Im rooting for you mate! I know you can win Naruto over!

Loved the lemon!! I feel so sorry for Sasuke though! He loves Naruto so much and Naruto has no clue. I wonder how Sasuke is going to explain any blond-haired and/or blue-eyed kids that Hinata gives birth to? :D

Wow. Yeah this chapter was just... Pure love. It settled all my misgivings. And now I'm just back to wanting to hug Sasuke again. Poor baby. It's so sad, yet Hott XD. LOL. And I totally fell you on getting lost in Ladelle's stories. So easy to do XD. I hope you update this again soon. Is there a regular schedule? or is it just as you edit the chapters? These chapters are shorter than the chapters I'm accustomed to getting from you, so they go too fast!! LOL, I always want more at the end XD, but I guess that just means that they're really good and on the bright side I can squeeze them in to my day easier *huggles* thanks for the update sweetie!!

Thanks.