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love it! this was the best lemon that i have ever read! congra! great job!can't wait for the next one! lol

hug&kisses

lily

Yes I see where 'Mine' came from, but still I really love this story, and how great is it that it birthed another great story as well. I do like how in this story Sasuke doesn't want to keep doing this to Naruto cause he is more focused on getting Naruto to love him not just the physical want of their bodies. Where in 'Mine' the Sasuke doesn't have the ability to say no to the physical cause he has to save Naruto's life with the act. I do wonder what he'll do to make Naruto fall in love with him though? How will he get this done or does he have to do much? Sasuke saying something about how he'd practiced with his own bushins before got me thinking . . . just what did Naruto see with in the genjustsu? Was it really his own bushins or did Naruto practice with a bushin of someone else; like Sasuke perhaps? Thanks for the update, keep up the great work.

I 'll have you know that you owe me $2.45 plus tax :: grabs yet another tissue:: no im serious ^.^;;; no really it was good keep typeing mean while im gonna have to make a trip to the store for more tissue paper.

I can't believe Sasuke. Silly boy. Even without seeing the title of the next chapter i could have told him that was going to back fire on him. His grip on sanity is tenuous at best. How will he feel after this... *sighs* I have to wait for the next one. This story is tearing at my moral fibre. I'm vacillating between wanting to hug and hit Sasuke. I mean seriously what's so wrong with opening your mouth and saying. Naruto, I like you. More than a friend. Please consider me?? What's so hard about that?? Nope he's got to rape the love of his life *smacks him* LOL, psychosis makes for great drama though *hugs*. Till next time.

Thank you for the new chapter! I love stories where Sasuke is obsessed with Naruto! Sasuke just can't control himself where Naruto is concerned. :D

I always knew Sasuke would be a twisted little rapist eventually.... hehe.. Keep up the good work!


Also, sucks to hear about your surgery. I hope it was nothing serious.

Possessive, crazed, obsessive sasu is the sexiest thing EVER!!! I LOVE the way you write him ^_^

yes sasuke is crazed but we all like him that way. and did you that your title for this chap is a wicked song by avenged sevenfold that has been trapped in my mind for the past week ever since i saw the vid on youtube? there's some non-con action plus some going on in there, too. creepy. anyway, looking forward to the next update.

~Devious

I loved it! This fic is amazing, and so is you're other story called Mine. You're an extremly talented author, so keep up with the good work. And I can't wait to read the next chapter. take care. hugs

I giggled the whole time I imagined Sasuke humping Naruto's leg like a horny Chihuahua XD He's really starting to scare me, it's about time he realizes he's acting like a nutty fanboy (not that I blame him =D).
Now, don't take this as a flame or an insult - I could never dream of doing something like that 'cause you're one of my favorite authors! - but I noticed that you often repeat the subject (i.e. Sasuke, Naruto) many times in the same paragraph. I know sometimes it can't be helped so to avoid misunderstandings as to who does what or what belongs to whom, but there are times in which you can easily replace the noun with a pronoun or something else (without exaggerating, of course!).
I've noticed this especially in the 9th chapter, but you said you've taken those meds, so I guess that explains the slip.
Besides that I'm looking forward to what's going to happen next (I have question, though I think it's a stupid one: does Hinata know and/or accept that Sasuke will most likely have his wicked way with Naruto at every given opportunity?)

Woah, I hope I didn't bore you with this long review :) Hope you get well soon!