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for The Agreement

by Jelp

person Allys
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What is going through that boys head!? LOL, I don't know if to be worried or excited XD. I'm really enjoying this, but *sighs* I hate Naruto going on about love when he's thinking about Sakura :(. I HATE NaruSaku with such a burning and thriving passion. It is my least favourite pairing. *grumps* Thank god for Sasuke and Hinata ♥
person Allys
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... Yeah Naruto and Sakura's situation is just getting more and more fishy :s... But hey they're gonna be married!!! All of them together! Loves that idea! Now if only they could figure out a way fo just the three of them to be married. Hmmm... XD. *huggles u* To excited to write much more. Loved the scene in the sex shop ;). Onward to the next chappie :D.
person Allys
schedule May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I have no idea what is going on in that boy's mind O.O;; Or your mind! XD. But I'm sure I eill enjoy it immensely. Gods you almost killed me with the imagery at the end there *drool*. And a bachelor party!! *happy dances* Will there be drunkenness at this lovely event?? LOL, I'm so excited but I'm also exhausted! I'm gonna crash and continue this tomorrow *hugs u*. it's kind of nice having multiple chapters to go through, but I still want to catch up!
person SasuNaru723
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, I love the way how you write Sasuke to be so damn possessive of Naruto. It's this that makes your SasuNaru stories so interesting along with many twists and cliff-hangers in the plot. Great chapter, Jelp!
schedule May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapter. =^^=


Although Sakura is making amends... I still can't see her being a helpful member of their little four part spousal agreement. Hmm... I'm just going to have to wait for the next chapter, eh? :D
Keep up the good work!
person jihaaa
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.. If I keep on reading this story, I'm going crazy, I don't understand many things, and I want lemon, sorry to say :(
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs* I want to hate Sakura... I really do. Why can't you just let me hate her. I'm a good person. I like kids and I'm kind to animals....
Excellent update. I loved your descriptions of how pathetic the 'bad guys' were. Too funny.
Looking forward to the next.
person Ash
schedule May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cool w/ Sakura being the good guy .... i mean girl but no 3some please (shudders).
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting; can't wait to see how the baby making process happens XD

BTW, it would be really neat if, in the end, we find out Sakura and Naruto's marriage was all a construct by the two in order to get Sasuke his wish of reviving his clan in some way. Like, Sakura knew that she had no chance of bearing kids for him, so she knew she'd have to get Sasuke to marry someone else and whatnot. Just an idea.
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, was it Neji that set up the attack in order to stop the wedding? Wonder if Sasuke will ever get to marry Naruto?! :D Thanks for the new chapter!