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by Jelp

person littleolmee
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hooray the wedding and double updates! LOL, double your fun with a double wedding, double couples, and double updates. Okay sorry to late to be too serious. Poor Naruto he was so nervous, Sasuke has his good points; he can always say the right things when he wants to help Naruto. Well I guess this is one of those times when you must be careful what you wish for. Sasuke wished for an attack to shove it in Sakura's face for the need of weapons and to living it up and he got it! Hmm did Neji have anything to do with this? Is this to teach Sakura a lesson or a ninja tradition or something like that? Can't wait till Saturday now, but at least it's not too long to wait. Thanks for the update. Take care.


littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my... drama!!


Nothing is ever simple, is it? Well, let this be a lesson to you Sasuke... something you get what you ask for. hehe ^^
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOO! I cant wait for the next one!
person mango
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
is it wrong that at "100 ninja," i imagined 100 masked ninja in black? you know, like your typical american stereotype ninja! hah :)
tkx for updating~!
person utau
schedule May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much, it is wonderfully written and I love the plot! I can't wait for your update! I also can't wait for the Sasuke/Naruto but then again it is better when things aren't rushed.

Ne, I have a question. Do you think that you can message your reviewers whenever you update? I'm sure others would like that to, if you don't mind that is.

Even so, please update soon!
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke activated his sharingan, ready for battle. He’d been getting bored with the wedding anyway.

Now, that's just perfect Sasuke right there. ;)

Your chapters are so awesome and I know I should be satisfied with that, but at the end I always just want more...
person Lily
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I mean the plot is awesome! yes i'm wodering who is behind everything. It was kind of sad when Naruto admit that he didn't have any other regrets. I was kind of hoping that he would say something like kissing Sasuke(I know that wasn't going to happen, but it doesn't cost to dream lol) the other think that i like about you is that you update really fast! which is great! I defenitely hate sakura, why her her???? i'm in Sasuke and hinata's side! GO GUYS! BRING HER DOWN! LOL anyway great job! see ya next chap.

hug&kisses

Lily
person Ren421
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story, along with Mine. I would love more frequent updates, lol.
person Anaheyla
schedule May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In your FACE, Sakura!
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Twice a week what?! OH PLEASE DO! And that chapter was funny! HAH! They will never know what hit them! I cannot wait for the wedding!