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hey is a good story wow update please :)

YAY!! always good to hear that an author wants to update MORE frequently :P
and i like how sasuke is getting obsessed with naruto i can't wait till all is revealed about who is marrying who?
i'm just wondering how the wedding night is gonna go? who's gonna consumate it? i hope sasuke and naruto and maybe hinata, but it still seems confusing lol please update soon like u were thinking

go for it honey!

more updates are always a good thing~! go for it~! you can slow down once you get to the parts you like more to create more suspense for us :P

update soon then~

Hey, anything that will result in more updates is something I'm for. >:) Fire away!!



(Hmm... we need to find a way to have Sakura back out of the wedding at the last minute... maybe each one say their vows and Sakura going last... then not doing it? I don't know. I'm just going to stop speculating since this story is already so awesome as it is and you seem to have everything already planned out. I can't wait!) Keep up the good work!

Great chapter. Hmm Sakura wanting Naruto to not have weapons seems a little strange for her being she has started to take her shinobi duties and learning so much more serious, but that was cause she wanted to be of help to Naruto to retrieve Sasuke. Being Sasuke is back though I could see her wanting to keep a promise to her grandmother. Loved the argument between Sakura and Naruto. It seems that Naruto is glad to have Hinata and Sasuke with him in this, when he couldn't get her to see his point he had others to step up and help deal with her. Hmm maybe he won't be too upset with the arrangement once he gets past the anger at Sasuke and Hinata doing this sort of behind his back. But I find it very funny that the lawyer actually said at one point that they were each to be married to the other three and neither Sakura or Naruto picked it up; well I'm not to shocked about Naruto but I guess Sakura has her laps as well. Hee, hee the wedding is next, can't wait. Now personally of course I'd love to see more updates. I guess the question is how long is the story? Is this a long story that even with double updates that it won't be over so fast that you'll have us rabid growling at your door frothing at the mouth for another story that you haven't had the time to get ready to post; cause you know having a pre-written story makes a good way to give you time to work on other stories. Also are you wanting to get the story out there not only for us but for yourself? *Looks around making sure other readers won't go after me for saying such things* In the end yes I'd love more from this story and I'm sure everyone else would too. No chance anyone will be angry about more updates. Thanks for the update, keep up the good work. Take care.

littleolmee

Yay! A new story written none other than by Jelp! I’m so happy and honored to read your latest masterpiece! So far, the entire plot is very interesting; I’ve never read something like this before relating to a four-person group wedding. How neat! And about the updating every Tuesday and Wednesday, that sounds awesome. Since I’m mostly the impatient type that can’t withstand waiting for the next chapter to come out, I 100% agree with the updating twice a week plan. So hopefully I can look forward to absorbing each wonderfully typed out chapter every Tuesday and Wednesday! Love this story, Jelp! Very creative and new! ^0^

loved the new chapter!!!!!keep up the great job!!!!!!!!!

Oh my making it all legal and all isn't he? Love how Sasuke's mind works. Hmm I wonder if Hinata's father has any inkling to what Sasuke is planning? If so he doesn't seem to mind it, or has he also sent Neji to check on things? Great chapter, it's getting closer I can't wait to it happens. The next chapter is going to be very entertaining. Sasuke getting them all to sign those documents. I can see Naruto just signing whatever and not reading it just cause Sasuke says "sign here and here." But will Sakura do so and not read anything or question what she is signing? How will Sasuke get it past her?