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by Jelp

schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a good chapter. I love the build-up and Sasuke's motivations behind everything and just your amazing writing skills but everytime I read I'm just waiting... waiting until the you know what hits the fan and Naruto finds out what is going on. I am sure it is a long way off, and what a ride it will be until then, but, for you, I faithfully (and with much excitement) wait.
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm absolutely in love with your story. <3
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm.. Sasuke's threeway fantasy with Hinata and Naruto sandwiched in the middle made me drool.... =^^= I hope it finds its way into the story. hehehe
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm.. Sasuke's threeway fantasy with Hinata and Naruto sandwiched in the middle made me drool.... =^^= I hope it finds its way into the story. hehehe
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke sure is cunning!! Love his perverted thoughts! The ones with him, Naruto and a clone though, not the one with Hinata! I am so looking forward to the wedding, too!! Thanks for the new chapter! :)
person Jien
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yes, it's very interesting, update soon mXD
person Gobi-kun
schedule April 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow I really like this story! I really cant wait to read more.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hmmm.... Sasuke and Hinata might be sneaky, but Sakura is up to no good. Something is amiss! Could she be stealing Naruto away to make Sasuke jealous and possibly out of spite? Gasp! Even if thats not the case, something is definatly amiss. I think its time Sasuke take up his family traditioning of detective work and start investigating. Detective Uchiha to the rescue!! hehehehe


Keep up the good work!
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter! I wonder if Sakura has just been using Naruto to try and make Sasuke jealous? She has to be very mad that Sasuke is going to marry Hinata instead. It looks like Sasuke maybe should be talking to Naruto instead of springing this surprise on him. Naruto may love Sasuke back!
schedule April 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That last chapter has my eyebrow raised... what could be going on between Sakura and Naruto.
And Naruto getting all up in arms over someone calling Sasuke gay but not himself. I giggled. Silly little Naruto.
Great chapter.