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by Jelp

person littleolmee
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee, hee a double wedding! Now wait a minute just who is marrying who in this double wedding? Mmm, interesting use of ninjutsu for personal reasons there. Hinata's father was very easy about her getting married, thinking like a clan leader I suppose but, it was nice that he mentioned he'd hoped Naruto would have been in Sasuke place. Liked how you gave him a more fatherly touch there. Great chapter, was worth the wait. *sigh* Now I got to wait another week . . . .

littleolmee
littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Sasuke's thinking...Maybe to him a double wedding means a double bachlor's party? Wonderful story btw. You rock ^_^
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU'RE HORRIBLE!!!! you're cliff hangers will be the end of me!!!!
person Acai
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Any chance for things Sasuke & Naruto to get together before Sakura & Naruto gets together (shudders).
person tch7
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NO Het or 3Some Please.
person mls
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to find out what sasuke is planning!!!!!!! loved chapter 2!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!!!
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! bad Sasuke! I hope his plan involves tying Naruto to his bed forever? Haha Please update soon!
person Nikana
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tell me, I promes i wont tell Naruto!!(hopefull eyes) Sasukes's idea i mean!^^
wonderfull chapter but it just let me thirsty for more,you are a genious ^^
bye XP
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the way you write the characters. Yay for a manipulative, scheming Sasuke. ^_^
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I wonder if Sasuke will set up so that they all spend their honeymoons together too!! Thanks for the new chapter! :)