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by Jelp

person Luma
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was a weird ending. xD Great, but weird.
Well done. n-n
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No! It can't end already! This is one of my favorite fics, how am I going to manage without reading it! *mopes*
But I've had a great time reading it, and thanks for making my life a little better by writing this awesome fic. So thank you so much, and I can't wait to read the epilouge.
Keep up with the good work and hopefully write more fics.
Good luck!
Take care. Hugs
person pumbaaaa
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah! You're going to to a time skip?!?! I never felt that you ever tied anything up with Sasuke and Naruto. I mean, they have sex all night long, and never talk about it. And....and...and...!!! You better satisfy me. ;)
person KibaNaru
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"They all lived happily ever after ... until their divorce 20 years later."
LMFAO
I can't wait 4 that! XD
schedule August 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omgosh! "The divorce???" Gah! I do not see that happening at all. o_o (Although 20 years is a long time... hmm...)

Keep up the awesome work. I'm both leery of and looking forward to the conclusion of this story. Until Saturday! Huzzah!
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to Sasuke to never leave well enough alone and always find someway to mess it up.

(Btw, I'm still hoping Naruto chooses Hinata too.)
Keep up the good work!
person pumbaaaa
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gah, stupid Sasuke. Only two more chapters?!? I feel like there is so much more needed....well, anyways, geat chapter as always, loved Hinata.
person kinai26
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh that was a cool chapter. Naruto and Hinata are cool and Sasuke is all flustered - so cute XD Can´t wait to read the end X3
person Nanin
schedule August 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story!
You write in a way that has me craving for more.
I can't wait till the next chapter!
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better. There was such great tension and intrigue with Naruto not knowing he was the father that I'm almost sad that part is over (even if that means sex scenes). I expect great things from you. Oh, and I hope you had fun at the convention.