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PLease Im begging you update sooner than Saturday. It would make me so happy.!~ I loved the way you wrote this. I could totally see this happening.

Surprising plot twist, and devious of Sasuke. I'm surprised that something like this caught my fancy. Do continue. I really enjoyed it.

omg jelp, this is gonna be crazy but i like it. i cant wait to see their plans in action. looking foward to the next update.

Awesome fic, finally someone came up with NaruHina without eliminating the whole of SasuNaru fans at the same time bashing Sakura..that perfect fic in my opinion XD

Please update when possible, I'd love to see the tension. Also with Sasuke being good friends with Hinata is a nice turn.

This is a great start to what I'm sure will be a fantastic fic. I can't wait to read more and I'm so happy that you're not planning to include any SasuHina action. I do hope though that Hinata gets to be more than just a babycarrier - she loves Naruto just as much as Sasuke and deserves to be able to "love him" as well. *nudge* *nudge* *wink* *wink*

What up jelp that was a good chapter i like where this one is going. I know you said their is going to be implied NarutoSauske but why dont you have many chapters with naruto on top insted of sauske. dont get me wrong i love both of them i would like to see more naruto being on top but I dont see a lot of it. as always love the stories keep me posted on all new chapters and storys later

OOOAAHHH! Jelp! I love it! Reminds me of what was going through my mind when I wrote 'Trials'. Got to love possessive, mad scientist genius Sasuke, the one who comes up with these wild plans to get just what he wants; Naruto. No complaints from me about posting another story. Hee, hee just more for me to read, what a pleasure. Yes I know I'm suppose to be writing aren't I? *points at Jelp* It's Jelp's fault! Must . . . read . . . Jelp's work! LOL. Personally I agree Sasuke/Hinata wouldn't work well with Sasuke so in love with Naruto and vise a versa for Hinata. Couldn't really see either of them to give in to just sexual release when they love Naruto so much. Stick to your guns. The three of them together might be fun to read but, just Hinata being a surrogate for them is an incredibly interesting idea. Can't wait to see how you'll get this to come about. And Sakura's reaction to all of this, especially when it comes out that Sasuke is marrying Hinata. If she does have any feelings still towards Sasuke this would certainly hurt her especially after Sasuke made sure to explain it wasn't her being barren that was the issue. I'm sure this is an issue that will continue to pop up as a problem with Sakura, a sore spot if you will; a point of weakness for her. I love this issue you came up for Sakura and the reason behind it, good thinking! I can't wait to see how Naruto figures out an attraction to Sasuke. Keep up the great work! I'll keep my eyes out for more from this story as well as your others. I really enjoy your work.

littleolmee
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Very interesting setup! Look foward to more soon =)

Well that was intriguing. I can't wait for more.

-Akiru-

Woow~ I have to tell you, I didn't expect this kind of storyline.

But its incredibly interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes~

Its so well written, and the very incharacter, I love it a lot!

Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!