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by Jelp

schedule August 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so you weren't really "sick" then. ^_^ My mum also has diabetes type 1, so I kinda know what you're going through. You said that you were in a hospital, then perhaps your bloodsugar was too low? An you nearly or maybe fell into a so called comatose-state?
Anyway, I'm glad that you're feeling better. And I'm so jealous about that you're going to an anime convention, because I have to wait until next year to attend to one. You see, I live in Sweden, so the anime convention isn't until January 2009. :( which totally sucks. So you're going as Naruko (if that's what Naruto's female form is called, can't remember) and you're boyfriend, maybe, as Sasuke. Hehe. SasuNaru! XD
I'm thinking about going as Kurenai, Iruka or Kotetsu. (I'm a girl, but they are the ones I can manage to look like ;P )
Anyway, I really liked this chapter. Things are starting to work out pretty well for Sasuke and Naruto. I kinda feel sorry for Hinata, but since I'm more of a yaoi-fangirl I kinda don't. Sure, she gave birth to the quadripplets (sp?), but since this is more of a yaoi fic, then I guess she'll just have to get used to the idea of just being friends with Naruto, aswell as Sasuke.
Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Hopefully you'll have a blast at the anime convention! ^_^
Take care. Hugs
person pumbaaaa
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alls I gotta say is I am still waiting for a kiss :) Great chapter, but these boys are so frustrating.
person Allys
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD Okay so that was HAWT and not at all as traumatic as I thought it would have been. But yeah that still waits to be seen really *Loves on you* Sorry to hear about your diabetes. I know how long term, incurable illnesses go, they flat out suck nuts. I have Rheumatoid Arthritis, I made 4 years in July. mine isn't life threatening, but it is really painful and restrictive, so I sympathise. I'm also very happy about your pager thingy. I hated self injections and I only had to do it twice a week. I'm sure you had to do it once a day, so... yeah. Thank you so much for the chapter XD. I love that Naruto seems to be getting closer and closer to Sasuke. The fact that he loved the quads so much just cause they were Sasuke's make feel all warm and fuzzy. But omg... Hinata. *Sighs* She needs hugs big time. I really hope they can work this all out. I don't want her to be heart-broken. *hugs you* Have fun at Otakon this weekend XD. I guess I'll look out for you again on Tuesday.
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm.. poor Hinata.. everyone's getting sexy Naruto action but her. I do hope you include her somehow. :P


Can't wait for the next chapter. You need to link pics of your sexy no jitsu costume. It sounds like an awesome idea for some cosplay. Keep up the great work!
person Allys
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Welcome back!! I'm really happy you enjoyed your vacation and even happier that you're back here with us! LOL, selfish I know but I can't help it. And wow what a comeback. Smut on the first try XD *Glomps u*. I was sitting here thinking that it came on kind of fast, but then I said to myself - honestly, what would you have done? LOL, the answer ran along the lines of - Aww Fuck it! Sasuke's sexy as sin and curiosity always was my downfall. Who am I trying to kid XD. I loved how at the end he's basically taunting Sasuke, challenging him to show him this obsession, scare him if he can. I love that, it's such an open invitation. The title of the next chapter makes me nervous though. There are so many ways that could go. Heart-breaking for who exactly? Heart-breakingly good, or just plain old heart-breaking? *crosses fingers and hopes for the best*. You update Tuesday right? Good. *huggles* welcome back, again XD.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're back! Yay, I'm so happy! *jumps up and down in chibi-form*
I've really missed you, for real, every day now I've been watching the Sasuke/Naruto-pairing-"file" to see if you've been updating this fic. And today when I saw it I actually shouted a "yay" out loud. Cause I'm totally inlove with this fic, it's so incredibly amazing!
And this chapter didn't disapoint at all, I have been longing for the "day" when Naruto and Sasuke finally would get down to buissness ^_^ hehe, I don't only mean it in a perverted way, but I also that I wanted Naruto to respond to Sasuke and show him that he cares about him aswell. So thanks for that my sweet!
I'm glad that you enyojed your trip to China eventhough some bad things happened. I hope that you're better now, not ill I mean, and if you still are, then get better and thanks for writing this chapter eventough you are suffering.
Thanks again for writing this fic, it's really one of my absoult favorite ones.
So keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
Take care. Hugs
person tash1021
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wait wait what about hinata?
person Ivy
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one ;-)
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like an awesome vacation.



Speaking of awesome... this chapter!!! OMG!!!! I'm so thrilled that this story is updating again. You have no idea. And Naruto is agreeing to take full advantage of his marriage status??? O_O Ahhhhh!!!! You've just made my day! ^^ hehehe
person Kalos
schedule August 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! love it!!!! feel a little for Hinata since she is the only one not getting any but oh welll the sasu/naruness makes up for it good job!