rate_review Reviews

Do you realize how many times I checked for an update in the past 48 hours? Yes, 48 hours, I even checked on Friday. And boy did this chapter satisfy! You didn't put too much sex, or too litte, just perfect. I love your characterizations, they are so utterly perfect. Sorry, I really suck at reviews. I do have to admit that I am very fragile at the moment. What I mean by that....I just hope the resulting relationships in this story don't disappoint me. I mean, Sasuke and Naruto are meant to be together, right? ahahaha. I mean, do you read the manga? #411? Oh my god, even if you don't, you have to see the cover of that chapter. And if you have seen it? I think my heart almost exploded when I saw it. I am such a fangirl.

yayyyy so happy you're back!! are you going to be updating twice a week again like u used to?
well this chapter was awesome as usual lol, really really really hope you don't do a time skip or anything so we can see this passion that sasuke has hehe, though the title worries me 'heart break' :( i hope its not sasuke's or naruto's, well keep up the great work, very glad ur back and posting :P

Welcome back glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the new chapter. I love this story

Welcome back er....can I really say that since I am IN South Korea? Well anyways good to see a new chapter. Pretty cool I have to say I am impressed how you manage to make just a tangle of angst and pull it together in the end. Or have you? Hmmm JA! On my way to Japan Thursday!!! Wish me luck. :3

Oh, that was sexy! XD Moar, moar! X3

I'm not finished the story yet, and while the plot is quite intriguing, I keep getting put off my a certain element.
The children. Babies one month of age barely gurgle much and blow raspberries and definitely couldn't wiggle about and 'accidentally' bang each other up. They can hardly lift their own heads!

A 12 month old child is hardly speaking, let alone communicating a series of words such a Yes, No and Hokage.

It's just the average one year old may be able to repeat sounds happily shot at them, but mostly, their around the mama, dada, maybe one or two other words. And they may not even be connection of what the words really mean. At 1 year, we are still predominately on continuous streams of babbled nonsense stage. Especially in a group of pre-mature quadruplets were develop is usually slower than normal. I'm probably making more of this than it means to anyone else, but as a care-giver it's just like a dumb pet-peeve. I love the scenario though, can't wait to see how this will all go down. Poor Naruto.

*pulls out hair* You know, I think I would have been fine with the wait, until you called the next chapter Seduction! You're evil! :P Can't wait.

Uh. I read it all at once, just now... It's not really my cup of tea, but I couldn't make myself stop anyway. That would, I guess, be more of a compliment for your writing skills then for this story, but I will continue when you update. And probably let you know what I think about details.

Sakura is the wife I knew I was marrying. I love her, and I want her back, but how am I supposed to have sex with her again when I know that Lee has had sex with her too?" Naruto asked, shuddering slightly. "It was one thing wondering if she ever thought about you while we were having sex, it's another to know that she'll have someone to compare me with," Naruto said, looking dejected.

Wow, could you make Naruto into any more of a faily asshole?

oh please say there's going to be at lest one threesome