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XD ... XD ... XD ... XD ... Yaaay!!!!!! LOL. I'm so happy he decided to stay! And he's not mad abut the smex!! (Only Naruto :) ). And he thinks Sasuke is a hottie! XD. Everything is Yay! Except I feel kinda bad for Hinata *Huggles her* She's in the friend zone. I was immensely pleased with Naruto for the majority of this chapter and sasuke looking like a kicked or rather about to be kicked puppy... So Adorable! LOL I don't know if this makes me a sadist but I love to see that boy suffer a little bit. Not too much, cause then I'd get sad, but a little bit is real real good *grins evilly*. And the title of the next chapter! *Dies in anticipation* LOL, I'm totally going to be a complete dorkus and mark the date on my calendar XD. Enjoy your vacation Sweetie. I hope you a good flight and everything goes smoothly. *Huggles* I wish I was going away this summer *sighs*. Ja! ♥♥♥

Sakura is playing her cards all wrong. (Not that I'm rooting for her.)




Keep up the great work!

Thanks for the new chapter!! I'm glad that Naruto is going to stay with his kids and that will give Sasuke the chance to win him over. Go Sasuke!!! :D

Evil, evil, evil*shakes head at author*. Just kidding ya. I personally like where you are leaving off for your long trip. It sets everything up for Sasuke's turn to show Naruto how much he really loves him. Sakura though, while I do understand where she is coming from thanks to the chapter on her side, I still feel she is behaving very badly for someone who has done so much wrong. It is funny how quickly she forgets that Naruto didn't ever cheat on her with anyone but she knowingly did. Naruto has been the poor sucker alone for the ride in this while others did all the deeds without his knowledge but she's angry with him for not walking away from his children? I found it interested that even though at an earlier chapter Naruto said he shouldn't have hit Sakura because he didn't really believe she would have hit the baby but it was just the fact she raised her hand to a child with her strength that made him act but in this chapter he goes on to say he doesn't want Sakura around the babies. Why is that? Is he not as sure as he wants to be that she wouldn't hurt them? Is he worried she would take her jealousy and anger out on them? Is this something Sasuke will pick up on and use to help win Naruto or is this just me picking things out and not really an important issue? Though I'd think it would be. It did lead Naruto to decide to stay and not leave with Sakura or is he using this as an excuse to see what he could have with Hinata and Sasuke? He doesn't seem as bothered by the idea of him and Sasuke being together as one would think but he did admit he had been having sexual dreams about Sasuke so that means one than just that one Sasuke gave him. I guess if he has been having dreams then he has had time to get use to the idea huh? Naruto doesn't know what he is doing does he? I mean he is use to the 'love' Sakura has giving him I'm sure the 'love' Hinata and Sasuke have to show him will be very different from what he is use to from Sakura. It will make getting things back with Sakura harder I'd think. Plus without Naruto around what would keep her from trying to get something going with Lee or someone else again? Will Ino play any part in this? I mean Sakura had been going to her to talk and Naruto mentioned he didn't think Ino would talk to him cause Sakura talked to her and Ino also thought he was cheating. Well, Aug 2 is a LONG way off but I'll hang tight and wait it out. Have a good time on your trip and be careful, come back safe, sound, and well rested. Take care and thanks for the updates before you left.

littleolmee

Cool fic - I love it so far. I have already left a mark in my calender so I´ll be able to read the next chapter when you post it XD

WOW! Neji's reaction was so cool lol! wow finally everything and everyone (naruto and sakura) know the true about everything. I think that it was really cute the way that the were slepping ^_^ I hate sakura. She shouldn't have done that to naruto! even if she thought that he was sheating on her. Because come on! that's no a good reason at all. And I was even madder(is that even a word lol) when naruto seem to be ok with her and everything! (can we accidentaly kill sakura? lol) ohhh I really wanted to hear Sasuke's explanation on how he got is sperm lol. too bad Hinata came right then.lol well I'm review in this today! and there is not another chap(today is 07/18) so I take it as you couldn't update:tears: well

WOW! Neji's reaction was so cool lol! wow finally everything and everyone (naruto and sakura) know the true about everything. I think that it was really cute the way that the were slepping ^_^ I hate sakura. She shouldn't have done that to naruto! even if she thought that he was sheating on her. Because come on! that's no a good reason at all. And I was even madder(is that even a word lol) when naruto seem to be ok with her and everything! (can we accidentaly kill sakura? lol) ohhh I really wanted to hear Sasuke's explanation on how he got is sperm lol. too bad Hinata came right then.lol well I'm review in this today! and there is not another chap(today is 07/18) so I take it as you couldn't update:tears: well I hope you have a good vacation enjoy!! We will miss you! have agood trip and we will be loking foward to you returning lol!

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Lily

Thanks for the new chapter!! I sure hope that Naruto will be able to forgive Sasuke for having non-consensual sex with him!

Oh my God you are an amazing author. This story is so real, so raw I can barely believe it. This story could have gone wrong in so many ways and honestly, I expected it to. Most authors (and I am also guilty of this) write what they want to happen, not what should. You've kept the characters true to form, which is hard. You've also managed not to make anyone a clear badguy. Infact theclosest person to being a badguy is Sasuke and he's the main character. I am really looking forward to update. Sasuke has a lot of explaining to do.

Once the cat is out of the bag, all the secrets start spilling out like an open floodgate. The next chapter is going to be Aw-kward (note the pause, mid-word, to emphasize the awkwardness.) ^^

Keep up the great work!