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by Jelp

person Allys
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha! Sasuke's so vindictive XD. He always was. Vindictive and mostly unrepentant. You write him so well.
He was having way too much fun gloating and carrying on. *sighs* I just wish it wasn't all going to blow up in his face. I can't believe Sakura's going to get Naruto :s. But at this point it looks like she gets to hold onto him for at least a little while longer. Can't imagine Naruto jumping for joy after he hears what Sasuke has to say. But at least he'll know he wasn't crazy and didn't imagine all those things. and the fact that he still has those kinds of dreams is majorly encouraging. *huggles u* Thank you so much for the update! I don't want you to go away!! But your trip sounds awesome. I hope you have fun.
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. You can't make any bad chapters, you know...that's impossible when it comes to this story and to you as a writer. This is actually becoming my favorite fic right now, because you never disapoint.
I really hope that there will be a lot more yaoi right now, since it's mostly het, you know, NaruSaku or NaruHina. But I don't mind the NaruHina pairing as long as it's mostly SasuNaru.
I really want the SasuNaru pairing to blossom. Cause' they fit like a glove. ;P
So keep up with the good work and good luck! Have a nice and safe trip by the way, I hope that you'll have a great time over there.
See ya in a couple of weeks ;)
Take care. Hugs
person Timberfox
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.

Neji's surprise at the door was hilarious to imagine.
I look forward to seeing Naruto's reaction to the whole truth. He may eventually need a mission or time away to truly absorb what's going on here. I know that I should feel some sympathy for Sakura but drugging Lee and hinting at her continued feelings for Sasuke is just too much for me.

I'm going to miss your updates over the break but I hope you have a good time.
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I every left a review but have been keeping up with each chapter. I love this story and I really hope you do up date before you go. Thanks for posting it.
person KibaNaru
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG!!! 3 Weeks! I can't wait that long! T~T I hope Naru forgives Sasuke, even if he's nuts.
person pumbaaaa
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah this is getting so good! Man, I can't believe there is only one more update for three weeks. Good thing I am conviniently leaving for two weeks with no computer access so it will be like only waiting a week for me ^^
person littleolmee
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL, right under the wire on a Saturday update. Great chapter, figured Sakura had done more checking to be so certain Naruto had cheated on her. I'm glad that she came clean with Lee too, sure Lee is going to be feeling really bad when he sees Naruto again. I'm glad Sasuke got everything off his chest towards Sakura, it was a long time coming. Hmm, what will happening after that display with Neji? Got to cause some waves too. Sasuke has a lot to answer for, will Naruto be able to find away to forgive him? Will he still come to see the quads? If he works things out with Sakura and she pushes him not to go over anymore will he do as she wishes? That would be a terrible predicament to be put in, ignore your children or go against your wife's wishes and cause more problems in a marriage that is in real trouble. How will Naruto react when he finds out him and Sasuke have had sex? How will Sakura react when she finds out? Will she be disgusted by the idea? Thanks for the update, look forward to Tuesdays. Take care.

littleolmee
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
O snap! The shit's bout to hit the fan! Update b4 u go please!!!!
person morlana
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have a great trip!

I think Naru is taking this all exceptionally well. He got over the first hurdle of recognizing the fact that he's a daddy. And I'm glad it didn't wait so far that he found out when the children was 5 or so. Now he can really record everything from his real perspective.
person Nia
schedule July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In your face Sakura. I really can't stand her. I can't believe she still thinks about Sasuke like that. I think Naruto has been hit in the head so much that he can't see that she's still hung up on Sasuke. There is nothing special about her.