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for So Hollow

by Rockyshores

person nyge98
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your story and i really love it. i vote for shika and naurto only. there are not alot of stories of these two.
person Stacy
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like the idea of shika and naruto. your story is by far the best with those two!
ok....here is my vote: A with a side of C please!!!!
person HannaFO
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Naruto doesn't stand a chance against Shikamaru :D:D He'll get him for sure!
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like so far. I like this pairing, though I haven't seen it very often. I like your twist on Shikamaru. Similar but different. I was a little surprised by Neji and Lee's presence in the group. They don't seem like the class skipping type, especially Neji but oh well. I do like it though and I can't wait for more character background, especially Naruto.

I just found this story, so I want to put in a vote for each chapter, for SasuNaru one-sided. So 5 votes for SasuNaru. In a lot of other stories Sasuke wins Naruto and the other/others always look ilke a-holes. I want to see Sasuke on that side for once.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry, 4 votes. Though if I somehow miss ch.5, I'd like to add another vote for the same for that chapter.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait for the next chappy! please hurry and post it!
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sweet yo, I was not disappointed heh... though I'm still looking forward to more. Seems a bit stuck atm but i'm sure it'll speed up soon. Welp.. best of luck yeah.. post more for us soon please..
person Eremi22
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story kicks ass so far.

As far as my vote goes: *stomps and chants like at a basketball game* Shika!/Naru! Shika!/Naru! Shika!/Naru!

So, letter A
person QoS
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Teehee, I love how you snuck "fifth door on the right" in there about Tsunade. Awesome so far dearie.
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH!!!!! Finally! It was a little short, but good nonetheless. I really want Naruto to sort out his feelings and get with Shikamaru. They make a great couple. And don't bring in any other annoying A-holes like Sasuke or Garra.