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for This Boys Life

by Yourangel

person Maria
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait for the next..!

good story!!! keep going!!!
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like this story, please update soon. It makes me laugh!
person a random ff.net authoress, m.t.h.
schedule August 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just read all the reviews for this story, and after seeing the review from the non-user '...', I must say that your grammar is fine, even when they speak. This is a story when they are in prison after all! I wouldn't expect to be all prim and properly speaking when I'm locked up and have been or will be for god knows how long. So, '...', you make my eyes bleed and don't have a creative look at anything, fuck you, bitch! How's this grammar for you? I pass all my english and grammar classes with flying fuckin' colors! ...Eh... Sorry. I get upset when reviews are put so harshly without a good take on the story.
person Elizabeth
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
person -
schedule June 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hard to understand or keep up with the story due to horrible writting and bad grammer
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aww... Naruto run. Like the chapters so far, keep up the good work.
person arthur
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dayum, its about time Itachi took care of Naruto. I think I would have lost my mind with all the teasing and tied him up and threw him in a corner!
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH no! Bad Itachi! Dammit Naruto always getting yourself into trouble! Cant wait for the next installment!
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well Naruto, ya see, if you keep playing with fire, you're gonna get burned...


^^ Entertaining couple of chapters! Keep up the good work!
person a light
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW write soon that's too much of a clifhanger!