rate_review Reviews

Wonderful! Gaara was so sexy!!!!!

Haha, I like the bits of humor at the end. Not the most convincing fic I've read, but given the restrictions you listed, I'd say you pulled it off fairly well.

In case you write about ramen in the future- you don't finish one bowl and order a new one. The bowls are huge. You eat all the noodles and ask for another order of noodles. They toss in the new noodles with some more soup into the same bowl. :)

Lovely story. Fantastic sex. Loved the piercings and the masturbation. Loved clueless Naruto. And I love your sense of humor.

I don't like Naruto being top but I loved that. It was so good and I was hoping for more. Now what I'd love to see is a continuation, with just what Naruto mentioned: a coming out with a boyfriend to introduce. And I wouldn't mind seeing a switch around (Gaara top, Naruto bottom) if you do decide to do one *hint hint* :D Anyways I really loved the story.