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for The Return

by Kurokit

person UnseeliePhairie
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, amazing...I'm afraid I don't really know what to say other then I hope to see more soon ^.^
person a kitsunes light
schedule May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WHAT?!?!? THE LAST ONE?!?!?! ARE YOU SURE????
Well if you are ok, but I think to understand it all it would be good to at least have two chapters more, to see how naruto is until the babies birth, then there birth, and maybe a little epilogue to show how everything goes from there(since it is a weird situation having three fathers and what will naruto do after having them(besides taking care of them)
WRITE SOON!!!
person Anon
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ding, dong, the bitch is dead!!! HOORAY!!!!!!!! Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person mrk33
schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Itachi is clever.....he knows more than he let's on. He does not trust
Sakura that is clear. Just wanted to mention a flaw in this chapter.
You explained in the previous chapter why Naruto had the pills, so
why did Itachi say he did not understand Narutos' desire to since he
was an orphan. If I remember correctly his reason's were choice, and
love. Which, he explained to both brothers.

Chow
person Anon
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. What about Sakura? What can Tsunade to to protect Naruto and their children? Hurry with the next chapter!!!
person a kitsunes light
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait !!! this is getting better and better! I just hope the brothers realize how sakura really is SOON!
write soon please!!
person blueh
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome!! I really love it! I've always found ItaSasuNaru (and ItaNaruSasu) stories to be delicious!! You've done a great job so far. Please keep updating!!! Can't wait!
person dyessie
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok naruto.. u got a lot to explain to a very pissed itachi.. haha.. goodluck to yah mah friend. nope.. the fic isnt boring. please continue. what about some sakura bashing.. it will help your worries about hits and reviews. :D
person a kitsunes light
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAY I can't wait! Again!
Write soon please I don't what else to say since I really don't know what to espect.
schedule May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! ItaNAru for life!!!! yAY!