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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i love you story please dont stop is good :)
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop writing. I would like to know what will happen next :)
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The story is awesome ;)and it's not borring in any way!!! keep writing like this and don't stop no matter what XP
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It's not borring. Don't stop writing. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are swiftly becoming one of my favorite authors, I can't wait for this to updated again. The way you portray the relationship between the threesome is unique. The way Sasuke and Itachi seem to be able to gauge Naruto and his reactions subtly portrays the fact that they have been watching him for so long even if only from afar. And the way Naruto interacts with others and internalizes his fears to some extent is beautifully in character. Even the way you characterize Sakura and her obsession with Sasuke is unique because I begin to both hate her and fear for her. So hurry up and update this or any of your other stories.
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually I very rarely reviev stories and almost always when i want to criticize somenthing in it but don't worry still readidng and hoping for some ita/sasu action
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Boring? Not at all, the pairing is so hot that I'm gonna beg you to update very soon, and if possible more often.*g*
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May 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I CANT WAIT!!! You stopped at the more interesting time! I can't wait! What will naruto do?!?!?!?
WRITE SOON PLEASE
WRITE SOON PLEASE
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You can come out. I loved this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Naruto thinks no one loves him. Bad Sakura, bad! I can't wait to read more.
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty original. Never seen this kind of plot at all, where Itachi is the Hokage and what not.
Naruto's really, really OOC, but I suppose you can do what you want with him, eh?
Anyway, this is doing good despite that. I like it.
Naruto's really, really OOC, but I suppose you can do what you want with him, eh?
Anyway, this is doing good despite that. I like it.