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Damn. That story was... I'm lost for words. Hot. Yummy. Omg.

Best yaoi story that I have ever read, and extremely well-written even if I am not a fan of KakaNaru. I would have liked if it was ItaSasuNaru only, but... I am not disappointed with the outcome. Great work !

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Since you're not going to do the sequel, would you mind providing a brief summary of how it would have gone when you release the next epilogue? I mean, even if another author opts to do it, it doesn't mean they would have followed your plan exactly since everyone has their own style. I'm just really curious what YOU would have done with it. :D

I'm not the best at spelling and grammar but I would happily beta the epilogues for you! I have had this as a guilty pleasure for quite a while. I liked the story, even through the errors that not being a native English speaker produced, your point came across despite this hardship. Thanks for this story. I also happen to suck at reviews so I hope you understand.

MEWWW!!! No ending here.. we still have little Naru's virtue to remedy! LOL. I'm glad to see you're back t updating this. I've been rereading the chapters every month just waiting. LOL and this was WELL worth the wait. ^^

More... NOW! I dont mean to be a bitch but I need more smut very soon. And I would just love to know whats going on on top of that couch. Also a little scene you might like to use is a sleepover where the boys friends sleepover and all four get a wee bit naughty with eachother. Cant wait for a new chapter bc ive been loving your work. Keep it up!!! ~Luke <3

I've just now discovered this story and it took me about four days to catch up. It is amazingly satisfying in am oh so sinful way. Kakashi is fiend and Itachi a sexy little minx and Sasuke . . . Even Naruto, my least favorite of these four, is a hot little thing. You deserve an award. But you really do need a beta. Nothing so bad that I didn't understand it, but whatever, I'm not perfect with that either. Please continue. I'm feeling a little dehydrated from all this sex. My ears were burning and I'm surprised not to have blood flowing from my nose. I wonder about the plot from here on, but I'm happy to see Kakashi entering this little house of forbidden sex.

Grate chapter!!!! I'm happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Ch 13
That was so so cute xx

ch 14
Aww, poor boys xx. So sweet and cute though ^_^