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Chapter 5
Heheh so cute, Naru <3
Haha, I knew someone would walk in, I was guessing Sasuke but hello Kakashi XD

I so do enjoy your updates. Please keep them coming!

Im so glad the trials are finally over, I can't wait for the next chapter

I think that this is am amazing story, and no matter how long it takes for you to get the next chapter up I will be waiting with baited breath. I hope that you post more soon. keep up the good work.

That was absolutely fantastic!! I loved the whole plot, and the bits of delicious naughtiness were very much appreciated. Is chapter 19 going to be the end of this one, or is there going to be more? I think this is the perfect place to end it, but if you want to add more, I won't complain. Also, I wanted to suggest you do something, like a sequel, where Naruto and Sasuke are more grown up and can participate a little bit more... intimately, if you catch my drift. ;D Your English is also really good for someone who didn't originally speak it, I think. I read something about that in one of your author's notes, and I kind of figured you learned English after your original one, but please don't be upset if I got that wrong. >.< I have one main criticism that i wanted to mention though, and I mean this in the kindest way possible, but your punctuation needs a little work. You kept leaving off periods after sentences, mostly in the dialogue, and you consistantly doubled up your end marks, like question marks. The best thing to do would be to just put one, and to only put two at the end if it's a little more forceful. Wow, this turned out to be really long, but I couldn't help myself. This was a truly amazing and addictive story; I couldn't leave it alone until I finished. Thanks so much for posting this here. I'll be looking out for that sequel! :D I'm also just going to throw this out there: if you need a beta, I'd be happy to help. You hardly need it, but there were still a few things that could be fixed. Thanks again!

WOOT, updates!!! Amazing chapter, I'm so glad that i checked in to see if this updated! Sasuke was awesome, and i loved how you handled itachis interrogation, hope you update within the next couple of months, this story deserves to be completed! (also i want to read it that badly)

you... you UPDATED! *bursts into blissful tears of happy happy joy joy.
At any rate, that was awesome. I love what they're pulling out here but i also want this case to hurry up so we go go back to the epically pervy stuff. >> those two young incubi are sooooooooooo hot. 'tachi doesn't stand a chance against them.
still, i'm hanging for the next chappie. *goes down on bended knee, begs, grovels.
pls pls don't make as wait so long between updates... pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase?

ah damn and it was going so well! I am so glad this story is back... its one of my absolute faves.

Damn! I knew that the council was going to ask that question! I hope to God that Sasuke can answer correctly. Im officially addicted to this fic. I hope to read more soon.

Sasuke is so briliant! I jut love him.