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for Sweet and innocent

by chibikitten

schedule July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing!!!!>.<
i felt like i peed on myself but i know i didn't but at the same time
i hang off of every word the details are so vivid and amazing
and GOSH I LOVE THIS FREAKIN STORY!!!!
person DewiSri
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep on writing!
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YYYYYAAAYYYY
Honestly...holding a glass of water, when one hasn't drank in months. I was very worried, I didn't know if you were going to continue the story or not, but i'm glad you did. I don't know why haven't more people reviewed, because it is good. I couldn't ask for the progress to go as well as i thought and its getting to the good parts. Don't give up!!! Love this story!
person DewiSri
schedule June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ty for uploading again =D Loved it lots
person DewiSri
schedule March 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This chapter made me cry. T-T Please update soon again.
person LoserKid
schedule March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow-y :D
So much drama, I Love it :D
<3 xoxo
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
in my defense this is the first story I check daily for updates, from my PSP. However, I tried twice to enter reviews from PSP, and it will not let me because i have to copy and paste a code to prove I am human. But so far I am loving how the story is developing, please don't be discouraged!!!
person DewiSri
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Use a bit more spacing between paragraph's. Other than that, this chapter was most exciting.
schedule January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YAY, another chapter, why do i have the feeling that the council may be involved with what happened to Sasuke? Going to pray that they manage to find Sasuke soon enough, If Kakashi is smart, he'll use his dogs :) well maybe. Keep up the good work :)
schedule December 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY, so happy you are continuing this story. True it hasn't been long since your last update but it was a awhile before that one. Well, gonna keep reading as it comes up, keep up the great work and it'll be nice to see how you solve this dilemma. Later and have fun :)