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for Sweet and innocent

by chibikitten

schedule May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story! Talk about sexy *drools* Oh..about your request in chap 1, it's 'silhouette'. Would you consider taking me on as your beta? I'm very fast in sending back the completed work (usually within a few hours, depending on my work schedule). And as i said, I love this fic.
person Jien
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loved it! Update soon!
person naracest
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Very nice. I can't wait to read more. I'm so curious to see just how far this story will go. Very addictive. Keep going!!!!!!
CHeers
Meg
person Dragon7
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule April 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very addictive. looking fwd to more. :)
person Dragon7
schedule April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon.
schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Looks like Itachi and Sasuke are going share Naruto with each other.^_^ Umm... is it consired incest if two brothers both fuck someone at the same time?
person SasUke28
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, this story is so kawaii! I don't care if there is mistakes here and there, I love this fanfic already! I can't wait for the next update, so, do so when you can! Sasuke has a crush! Itachi has a crush! Naruto is clueless and young! I'm swooning all over the place! Muh, please update when you can!

*smooches*
-Pepsi
person Dragon7
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!