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May 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, A lot. I don't get everyone's hatred of him. I thought they worshiped the ground he walked on?
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November 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice characterization. You did a very good job showing the D/s aspect!
Thank you so much for the great story.
Thank you so much for the great story.
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August 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A shocker, one almost sqirms reading it.Oddly comforting.
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June 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job with their relationship dynamics, and with Sasuke complex emotional turmoil. What's amazing is that you never once DESCRIBED his emotional state, but SHOWED us through your setting, character actions and flawless dialog. I'm supremely impressed.
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May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally and absolutely amazing.You are god/dess like.Kudos.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I kind of disagree, I liked the second chapter better. It seems like the first one deals with Sasuke's guilt, which is more obvious, but the second deals with Kakashi's guilt. It's subtler, but still hot :) Good job!
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, you are possibly one of the best writers on this entire site. Your use of cool intellect when writing such a... well, a "hot" piece just further proves this. I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
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April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Even though Sasuke is a bastard, he does deserve some lovin'. I have to admit that i liked the first chapter more but overall, it was good!
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April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this; always the emotion and stuff make the story that much better.
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April 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is fantastic! I love that Sasuke feels guilt about his betrayal, specifically his betrayal of Kakashi ^__^ Heee, and yeah, hot!