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for The art of sand

by KotoneHime

person gaara89
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm not a huge fan of incest...actually I don't like it at all, but other than that the story seems really good! Please update soon
person HannaFO
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Buhuu.. i wanna see what happens XD heh Great chapter :D
person gaara89
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm....getting good! Keep it up!
person Raholea
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm away or 2 1/2 days, and you post like crazy!! *glomps* i'm ust glad I had something more to read when re-emerging to the world of written art. lol. i loved the updates and i'm eger to find out if sasuke ever does get his litle blond. I'm waiting for more!!!!
person nawatia
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Huh, never thought of Itachi and Kakashi together. I wonder if Iruka will show up in this story...
person gaara89
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hm...I don't think I've ever seen Sasu/Kisa...very original and not at all disgusting! Please continue soon, I'd like to see where it's all going to head!

~Reigh~
person Momma Cat
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG! KakashixItachi! Wh00t I want to bare your first born. o_o I was shocked as hell with the Kisame thing. Only because he was bottom... Jeez woman I adore you! Let's make a beautiful fic together!!!
person HannaFO
schedule May 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hot!!! Hehe Kisame as uke!? Never heard that before :D great update!!
person nawatia
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow - you can do soooooo much with the combination of these two characters!!!! I can't wait to see where you take this story. I kind of yearn for a protective Gaara, and a cherished Sai...but it is your story - can't wait to see what happens next!!!
schedule April 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to add chapter 12 cause it shows 12 and 13 but there is nothing there.?