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for Slaves of the Maelstrom

by Slyfer101

person Reaper4991
schedule May 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Huh, Naruto's orioke ninjutsu is gonna come in handy since he can do that as a real transformation
person Anon
schedule July 25, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I was liking it till the third chapter when it became pwp
person Swagwell
schedule June 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love what you've done here, how many more slaves will naruto and hinata take befre this ends? And will you add the seven tails host to that list?
person Swagwell
schedule May 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love what you've done so far, why not add konan of the akatsuki to the group or maybe kurotsuchi
person Will
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Any chance this'll be continued?
person Akuma
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Her new master wasn’t huge really, though he was certainly ‘above average’ for his age and size. His shaft was probably about six, six and a half inches long, and about two inches wide.
Considering he is 12 than he is huge. 6 and a half inches would be above average for a grown man; for a preadolescent than he is a fucking monster.

Hope to see this continued!
person Akuma
schedule February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Have the bells redesigned to affect others. If you continue this will we find out about the Taki girl?

*Kid’s a natural lover,* she thought, *Too bad he’s too young for me…I’d give him a real memory.*
Really hoping for some NaruAnko action. the age difference is like 10-12 years or so. Considering Naruto's life span not that big a difference.
schedule December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Come on! I need an update or I'm giving up on this story!
person Aina Flash Williams
schedule December 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Dude nice but u really need 2 update ur stories including eyes of seduction except 4 dat u rock
person nyhi
schedule November 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very good story cant wait for an update