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I do hope you wright more for this story its the Best Naruto Adult Fic ive seen(Yaoi sucks and so do fics that Naruto isnt the Main Charictor(Its Called 'Naruto' for a reason)

Please update soon!!!

Damn this is one sweet fanfic so far, So I'm guessing since most people think that the 4th Hokage, AKA Minato Namikaze, is his father, meaning that this other person is Naruto's Half-sibling. Also have you thought of Naruto using the Shadow Clones combined with his Sexy Jutsu while he's with Hinata and their slaves, this way Naruto could feel what a girl/woman feels when having sex. Anyway I do hope you update this fic soon, I would hate to see it just stop here and not continue.

I am really looking forward to reading more of this fic. Please update ASAP.

Hi
I really like your story, you have an interesting writing style. I´m new her and don´t really get it, is there a way to get news when you opload a new chapter or could u write me or something?

Have a nice day
The little Hentai (^^) KazekagesKitten

hope u update soon.

This is an interesting change of the story... Naruto learning some basic skills from ANBU, getting a slave, Hinata getting Anko as a teacher (alot of authors think that is a very good idea which I agree) and a slave as well. And the saving of Saruatobi, "THANK YOU!!!" I love that guy. I can't tell you how much I loved the Takuya/Naruto/Kin part of your last chapter. I can't wait for the Hinata and Naruto and maybe free for all slave in the bed scene (is that even possible? 4 girls and 1 guy = 2 arms, 1 mouth, and 1 cock...) any chance that Sakura or Tsunade could join the fun (not joining them just for fun, just asking). Keep up the great work and hope to see more soon!

I am very impressed by your writing. Everything wors out well, both plot-wise and in continuity. You give great thought to everything you have come up with, and the story is very interesting. While a pure sex story is fine, you've also worked the non-sex elements and parts of all of this very nicely. Also, as a lover of writing and a grammar freak, I approve that you don't really have any errors I can find, and seem to write with the skill level of a college student. You also are very creative...part of me is curious about what inspired the irony thing, but it isn't my place to ask. I can't wait to see the next chapter.
I was curious about two things. First off, I was wondering if I could take a shot at betaing future chapters for you.
Second, while normally you'd have inspired me to start a story of my own at this point, I'm already working on a story at our sister site, www.fanfiction.net. I was wondering if you might be willing to read and review it, seeing as how I need feedback from serious people. You seem like the kind of person who won't type only 4 words...or spend a review either giving me orders and telling me what to do with my story instead of commenting on what they did/didn't like. It's probably to much to ask if you'd want to beta in exchange for my betaing your story, but even if you only reviewd my writing, I'd be happy. Whether or not you want to beta my work, my offer to you still stands regardless. Keep having fun writing this amazing story.

So Tenzo and the others have to go get Sasame and Yugito huh? It seems Sasame is Naruto's sister and Yugito will probably be someone for Naruto and/or Hinata to break and turn into his/her slave. I like Yugito; she'd be a good match for Naruto as a fellow Jinchuuriki (maybe).

Ok I¡¦m going to be blunt I¡¦m someone that doesn¡¦t review stories very often and most of the time it¡¦s to tell the writer why I don¡¦t like their story and after reading your story you know what I found ¡K¡K¡K.. Not a damn thing I couldn¡¦t find anything I didn¡¦t like you wrote damn near the perfect story congratulationsƒº.