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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!!! Please update soon!!! Maybe have Hinata give Temari to Naruto as a gift while asking to go out with him.
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!!! Please update soon!!!
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a realy good story i hope to read more of it soon
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good, i like it
update soon
update soon
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April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do hope that the way you are writing Sakura is that she won't become a traitor and then turned into a slave. I think it would be best to have Ino be the one to confront Sasuke when he leaves and convinces him to take her with him. Then she can be captured and Naruto tells Sakura about the whole slave thing. He convinces her to take Ino as her slave in order to save her. Then when he returns from training with Jiraiya, he will have six willing women at his disposal.
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well I was sceptical at firstTorturing by Naruto?
But his form of torturing istn't so bad I think ^^.
This is one of the best Naruto Fics I read so far here. It is on a similar level as "The Code" or "Vixens and Kitsune" (two of my other favorites).
I'm eager to read more of this (Well, if Naruto and Hinata will become a couple I would say there will be some REALLY Interesting Scenes between the two AND the three "slaves").
But his form of torturing istn't so bad I think ^^.
This is one of the best Naruto Fics I read so far here. It is on a similar level as "The Code" or "Vixens and Kitsune" (two of my other favorites).
I'm eager to read more of this (Well, if Naruto and Hinata will become a couple I would say there will be some REALLY Interesting Scenes between the two AND the three "slaves").
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and the plot of it all.... I just hate the changes in it... Well not all of them but I just wanna see more of the fights that happen in the show in your writing... Hope you update soon.