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Well this is interesting i take it from the BDSM mentions ealier about who ever marries Naruto that Hinata will be into that or at least be a sub to him and i am guessing that Yugito will be brought in with the whole cloud thing and what not well

This story is pure awesome! I love it! I like Kin and Tayuya being Naruto's slaves and Hinata taking Temari! I can't wait to see Hinata finally get to have sex with Naruto! I do think if Hinata enjoys sex with Temari that Naruto should use Sexy no Jutsu for her. Plus then all the girls can let Naruto experience what they like the most.

really nice story man

BEST STORY EVER!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter so update soon pleace.

Wow. It's rare to find a well-written story on aff.net, especially a lemon. Most authors focus too much on the sex and forget about basic things like grammar. You've not only maintained grammar, you've brought a wonderful, original plotline, and I'm horribly hooked. Naruto's growning as a person (but not in an unbelievable way), Hinata's coming into her own, and you're working in the supporting female cast. Apparently you posted all 5 of these chapters today; I'll be looking forward to more from you in the future!

wow this was much better than i thout it would be please keep up the fantastic writing and update a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows

Well I have to say I like this story, you got a lot of decent plot going on here with some nice hot scenes in all the right places. It's a unique touch to things and I see you addressed a few things without totally bashing characters (true Kakashi wasn't much of a teacher in part I but he made up for it in part 2 at least)

I wonder when Naruto and Hinata will get some time together though, I mean both have some sexual experience now so maybe have them go on a date at least ending up back at his place would be nice to see. Plus will Temari also get a little side action as well? I can already see a nice scene with Naruto and all four girls after all with shadow clones he can keep each one satisfied. Will any more girls get put into this little thing going on plus what do all of Naruto's friends think of what's going on with his life now? Another thing that came to me with all the sex what happens if a master gets his slave pregnant? That wasn't covered in the laws that were put down earlier in the story although I get the feeling that will be brought up with the woman that was Naruto's father's slave and I suspect a child they had together that same one that Tsunade is trying to get.

I'm guess that person is Naruto's half-sibling? But that's just a guess unless I read a few parts wrong.

Anyways sorry you haven't gotten much in reviews I don't see why it's a good story so I hope you keep it up.