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I'm getting tired of waiting for an update! Please update real soon!

Everything was good until Hinata began to turn into a T.I. mistress. OK, that was plausible and all, but at least not with Temari. The girl is too strong and proud, it was painful to watch her fall.

Fantastic. I really enjoyed the dynamic between all of the different characters, and I think you captured the personalities phenomenally well here. I've only finished the first chapter, but I will definitely be back tomorrow to start in on the second! Hopefully you'll keep writing more for this story.

Please write more! This is one of the best stories on this site! It has great sex (though some more anal sex and use of jutsu during sex especially the kage bunshin wouldnt hurt) and the plot is rocks. I've probably read this fic more than 5 times now and I'm just dieing for you to update! I want to know whats going to happen with Koto. I want to see some sex with Yugito. More relationship development between Naruto and Sasame (and the rest of the girls). And I bet Naruto and Hinata's training to resist sexual torture will be so hot. I'd love to see Hinata make Naruto her pet and visa versa, but the thought of what Anko will do to them is driving me nuts with anticipation.

if your still aroound pls pls update soon, this was fantastic

i'd fave it if i could

So...we ever gonna see this continued man? It's one of the hottest stories on the site and one of the best naruto lemons around. It'd be a shame to see it not finished. Plus I wanna see Temari give her ass to Naruto. After all, if Naru and Hina are getting married, then all the slaves can bear his kids ne?

You've got to update man. please!

i love this story... but why isn't there more!?! there must be more!!!

wow. i 'm loving this fic, is there an update soon?

As always, this story is absolutely incredible. How is the next chapter coming along? kylekatarn77@aol.com