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Damn.......Hot and crazy stuff in this one lol LOVE It!

you should try not make the prisoners break so easily.
and why did orochimaru tell kin about the invasion when she was supposed to be killed by sasuke in the forests of death.
And why would the kunoichi rather be with the persons that tortured them instead of dying.

I love the story and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!

Please update really soon!!!! It has been a long time since the last one!!!!

this slave fic is so fucking awesome its breaking down reality

love the story! and I hope you update soon!

Please update one of your Naruto stories soon please!!!! It has been far too long since you have updated!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update one of your Naruto stories really soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please update really soon!!!!

Nice chapter. Liked the Naruto/Sasame interaction. Is there going to be any incest? I think that'd be pretty hot! And the dinner with Hiashi was pretty funny. Tayuya is such a masochist!:) And when Naruto talk to Hiashi in private, I was torn between worrying for Naruto's safty or to laugh a his plight! Glad to see he's okay with Hinata being with Naruto. Liked the songs that Hinata played while torchering Yugito. Can't wait for a sex scene with Yugito! Speaking of sex scenes, I liked your use of vocalizations in Naruto and Hinata's quickie scene. Thought it was a bit short, but I understand this chapter was more for plot develpment, so thats fine. After all, this story does have a good plot and I don't want this to become a PWP story! Keep up the good work and please update as soon as you can!(both this and Kouingan)