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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that is a heck of a way to get a kitty to purr. One question is Kirabi (eight tails) going to make an appearance in this story? Oh boy I can't wait to see what happens next. Ass-assins, jinruki sex slave, horny Hinata, and shadow clone Narutos Oh Boy!!! More soon!
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so good, really like this story and I love the concept. Only thing that bugs me is the amount to time it takesto update it. If it was quicker to update, then things would be perfect.
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January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. It's rare these days to see a good, well-written story with original elements and solid world-building like yours, especially in the threesomes category. Smut is all well and good, but plot just makes it even better. Keep it up!
You seem to have a small problem with grammar though, especially they're, there and their, your and you're and other homophones, as well as apostrophes and pluralisation. It can be jarring in some scenes to see tiny, easily fixed mistakes like that.
You seem to have a small problem with grammar though, especially they're, there and their, your and you're and other homophones, as well as apostrophes and pluralisation. It can be jarring in some scenes to see tiny, easily fixed mistakes like that.
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January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great work
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see this story come back! It was one of the first Naruto stories I read on this site, so it's a nice nostalgia trip. I hope you continue to update, and I rated this witha a 5/5. Great job!
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update your Haku story! I LOVE Haku!!!!!!!!!!
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January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very hot. Please continue.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can totally see Yugito dressed in a cute kitty outfit as a little tease from Hinata, especially if she includes gloves that keep Yugito from using her hands with full dexterity. I can also see Yugito curled up by Hinata's side napping in a sun beam as Hinata reads a scroll while Temari plays some music or makes tea. And Hanabi giggling as her sister's new cat chases her around to help her train her agility. I hope Koto can be freed from Orochimaru and Kabuto's control, I can see her gladly becoming Naruto's slave to save her sanity.
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!!!!!! An update please update again soon!!!!
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
No isn't that interesting? I wonder how many people actaully think to use pleasutr for torture/brain-washing. It'd probably be more effective than the stick method though maybe not as effective as the stick and carrot method.