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for Slaves of the Maelstrom

by Slyfer101

schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!! It has been a long time!!!!!!! Either this one or your other one please!!!!!! (Can't wait for another Haku scene in the other though!!!)
schedule December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just thought of something, wouldn't Sasame be Naruto's slave as she is the daughter of Naruto's dad's slave???
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schedule November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Woot! Hinata gets another slave yay!
schedule November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think that Naruto should interigate Yugito personally because they are both jinchuuriki...and I just want Naruto to have her because it would allow him to train to control the Kyuubi's chakra better without anyone finding out about it. I know you already said it will be Hinata and have a 3 month head start into it but please make it where she says that the only way she sumbits to anyone is if they had the power of the Kyuubi itself at there call because she doesn't know about the Kyuubi. Please update soon and respond to this aswell.
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next installment.
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great writing! I don't usually read het but this was so good! Fantastic!
schedule October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know when your last update was, but you should definitely update this again. The plot is original and of a high quality, your grammar has few if any errors, and the chapter length is phenomenal. I hope to see this story going farther ^_^.
schedule September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The last lemon in this chapter was A-WE-SO-ME. You really have a way with words. I hope you keep writing this fic because it's one of my favorites.
schedule September 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really looking forward to reading the next chapter of this story. It's been a great story to read thus far.
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really hope to see you update soon, I really want to see more of this.