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for Slaves of the Maelstrom

by Slyfer101

person edelta88
schedule September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol "that poker game when we were kids" seems to be a fairly common theme

person edelta88
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol by the end of this all the guys are going to hate Naruto for setting the bar so high

Kin smiled. “…and he’s good with his tongue too,” she whispered, blushing deeply when Falcon to burst out laughing.Eagle just sighed. “I said I didn’t want to know,” he groaned. -did I mention how much I love these Anbu

“Masochist,” the purple haired woman replied.“Is that an offer?”“NO!”-well you've got Anko pegged




person edelta88
schedule September 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
“And now that pauper’s going to be a ‘knight in shining armor’…man, it feels like some cheezy romance novel.” She grinned. “Of course, with that slave-girl Naruto-kun has, it might just turn into a book worth reading.”-I'm going to have to agree with Anko this is deffinetly worth reading

being small, a girl, and having the Byakugan would also make Hinata an excellent assasin if she ever got over some of her issues

people just don't seem to learn Konoha ninja are good but you threaten their loved ones and shit happens, the 4th proved that

Hinata trimmed a spiral into her pubic hair...well I can honestly say I didn't see that coming


person edelta88
schedule September 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROTFWL I love these Anbu

I'm going with Jiraiya on this one, torture by polka is just evil, brilliant, but evil

using kin for shaving practice for when he gets older...nice

AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA so Naruto fingering her was her most erotic memory oh that's great

schedule August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Please update again soon. thanks.
person shingen
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good, I am glad that you are finally bringing Hinata and Naruto together. I am just eager to find out where you are taking this story. I eagerly await more. Chhers!
person KaelHyun
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No ofence but its about damn time that you updated this story!!

Also I hope Yugito is added to the harem Real quick
schedule August 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
For clarification's sake, I meant Yugito, not Yuugao. I don't know why, but I felt that I needed to clear that up.
person Zetsumei
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Unique story. As far as I can tell, original plot, and good amount of lemons for this type of story. A very good story.
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An amazing update! Sasame's been found, Yuugao's coming to Konoha, and Hinata and Naruto are finally together! I'm guessing Yuugao will be taken as Hinata's slave, since Naruto already hit the two-slave limit. Then their little harem will be complete. Granted, Sasame may make use of a few of them on her own, but I assume Naruto won't be involved whenever his "sister" is. How will Naruto handle Danzo and the others on the council who dislike him? And how will the Hyuuga react to Hinata's involvement with Naruto (not that she'll care at all)? I'm really looking forward to what comes next, as well as chapter two of Kouingan