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July 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it's good and well written. even has a through plot. you have lots of original ideas and a keen mind. keep it up,
oldman543
oldman543
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOSH, WOW, PLEASE UPDATE SOON, I CANT WAIT FOR MORE. ADD HINATA SOON PLEASE THANK YOU FOR YOU TIME AND ENERGY WRITING THESE STORIES.
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July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I am glad I chose to read Slaves of Maelstrom after I read Kouingan - The Seduction Eye wow! Normally I'm not into slave fics but your's are very good and funny and I hope you continue both of these stories. The only bad thing I have to say is you need someone other then yourself to look at them to catch the minor letter glitches that appear from time to time. Please update soon. Signed a fan of Tayuya, Hinata, Anko, Kurenai, and Temari.
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update soon please
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June 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a story I hope is updated on a regular basis. It is greatness.
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June 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Definitely the best story on the site. Although it has been awhile since the story was updated this story. Can't wait til Yugito joins the action. You could also add Karin or even Konan. Now adding Konan will certainly be interesting. Talk about IRONY - converting the Akatsuki's (An organization hunting Jinchiruuki's) third in command to be a Jinchuuriki's (Naruto) slave. You could have Jiraiya be the one to capture her, considering not many can.
Hope you to update soon.
Hope you to update soon.
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey, are you ever going to update? i want to see Naruto with Hinata at least once. plz tell me if you are going to update again or not
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June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
go history
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May 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hellol lol !!!
this story is fantastic
please write the next chapter quickly and take it on the site
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sajuuk21
this story is fantastic
please write the next chapter quickly and take it on the site
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sajuuk21
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very great story. I'm not a big fan of bdsm but this has peaked my interests in trying it once again. Keep up the good work and I look forward to some more.