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January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This sounds like a good story to start. I like the twist on minato committing genocide on Kyuubi's kind. I thought he'd be more like Gaara's father when u said he'd be bad in this.^^
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay I just have to know what he is going to talk to Naruto about...I love this story and I like how You have Naruto not a moron. I think that with how the anime and manga is done you have done the right thing in having it all be an act. Thank you for a great story and I look forward to more.
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October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love every ounce of this story i want and desire to read more!!!!! thank you so much for continuing with this i will check probably every day for updates thank you so much i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sweet story! I just found this story and was so excited to read something where Naruto is not an idiot. And I like that he is with Kakashi. This story is brilliant and I really have enjoyed these 15 chapters. Thank you for a great story.
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm only on the 3rd chapter and i love this story already. it's really a different intake on naruto and things are flowing very nicely, but really, if ppl are offended by naruto having under aged sex then wtf are they doing reading naruto smut in the first place? fanfiction is just that, FICTION. i say screw them and dont change your story because a few ppl can't handle it.
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November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UR STORIES ARE TOO GOOD, KEEP UPDATINGG, AHHHHH
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah there is nothing wrong with some controversy!
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
boo to Sasuke! I say hook him up with Kakashi ^__^
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahah great fic so far
and the whole idea of naruto not wanting to be a ninja but being stuck as one, nice
and the whole idea of naruto not wanting to be a ninja but being stuck as one, nice
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September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Haha.. Sasuke is such a possessive little bastard. Great to see you updating again!
Keep up the good work. :)
Keep up the good work. :)