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for If Only You Knew

by narugal101

schedule April 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Duh, duh ,duh...! what's Sasuke up to? I can't wait for Haku and Naruto to meet! I hope they get along okay like in the show.
=)
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love the way you changed Naruto's character like that, suggesting that his personality from the canon was all a mask. Interesting concept. I also don't think that it's pedophilia; he's a 12-year-old, but 12yo boys aren't completely innocent. That's the age at which many boys, dare I say it, start discovering their sexuality. Nice work here, please continue.
person Leeana69
schedule April 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, I felt dirty reading this...but then I decided to make them a little older then 12 in my mind and I felt better.
Though I am a shouta fan when it comes to the Uchiha brothers. :p

I like the story, I hate the fics where Naruto's stupid. You get a glomp.

GLOMP!! XD