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for When Morning Comes

by PrplGrl

schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Shikamaru as a life-saver...*cheers him on*...and Naruto giving up his own happiness for that of his father...*cries*...You know you are putting your readers on an emotional rollercoaster, right? ^^ But I enjoy it! More please!!!
person Rae
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!!!!!! Please write more soon I cant wait!
person kenshinjunkie03
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
now i'm almost scared to know what happens next...but i will look forward to it, and leave a review because i'm really enjoying this fic^_^V (you rock^_~)
person HannaFO
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay!!! so i guess we get to know if they get together in the next chapter?! :D Thankf for the update!!
person Jien
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really nice, update soon!
person pen_name
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YOU! You are eviiiiiiil! *cries hysterically* But I love you so muuuuuch! I cursed and smacked my desk (no, seriously, and I was at work, too) when I reached the end of this chapter, and now I can't wait for the next update! Oooh... MinatoxShikamaru is LOVE!!! Great job! ^o^
person bb
schedule May 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
0_0 Gah! Some cliffhanger! Man, this story really did something to my heart. Not a lot on here can do that. You're fucking awesome.
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* What a heartwrenching chapter. Poor Shika *cries* I love the way you described his feelings. Beautiful, yet sad. I wonder what Naruto wants. I just hope there is a hapy ending to this. Will you do one if I give to another naked-Shika-shaped cake PLUS a naked-Minato-shaped cake?
person german_nemesis
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this is so good it hurts. I sat on my bed crying when I read this chapter.
person pen_name
schedule May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I am simply loving this! The almost-sex in chapter 4 was hotter than the sex in chapter 1! XDDD Um, but, can I ask you something? Please, please, pleeeeeease don't turn this into a threesome and just keep it Namikaze/Shikamaru... *is down on hands and knees, begging and crying*