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by Elli

person LumiiSol
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, another wonderful chapter! I must say that Sasuke in this chapter slightly reminded me of one of my own cats. Get too close when he is in the mood and you may get hurt. I don't really think that Naruto being a hermaphrodite should scare away too many fans. Then again, you never know. I was also very surprised when both For Your Eyes Only and Kitty, Want Some Candy updated recently. I about flew out of my chair, so if you are to thank, then you hold all of my love. Can't wait until the next chapter; keep up the good work!
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it! is this a sasunaru pairing by the way? I think it would be good if it was =) keep up with the good work! take care. hugs
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just finished reading all three chapters. I love it!! I hope you update soon ^.^. I kind of like the idea of Iruka and Kakashi XD lol
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lol, Sasuke seems to be the one possessed. Heck he scared the crap out of Iruka. Okay but all jokes aside the whole mating practices here was pretty interesting, for a minute I forgot they were cats they seemed more like beast, maybe it was Naruto's inner fox and Sasuke's inner wolf or something, who knows? And I hope Kakashi is going to stick around. Iruka seems to have much on his plate with all the animals it would be nice if he had some help, plus Kakashi is more knowledgable. And besides maybe with Iruka preoccupied with Kakashi then Sasuke might actually get some, Iruka looks like he is about to go into 'mother hen' mode any minute, trying to keep Naruto 'safe' from Sasuke especially now that he knows the situation. Kudos to the person who thought of the koala idea, I love the idea of a Koala Shikamaru, so cute! Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Man...Naruto just can't get a break. His little flashback was so sad, throwing the poor kitten in the river like that. Bastards! Though Sasuke's little 'when animals attack' stunt was wicked cool. Clawing at the door....-shivers- uber cool. Does Gaara get to be a panda....please.... please let gaara be a panda!!! and Shino Moth kicks ass!! Go bug-boy Go! hehehe looking forward to the next chapter!
person ItaNarulover
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh..sorry, ignore my question about the pairings! I didn't see that you already explained it...sorry..it's a great story..so ignore me..bye. take care. hugs
person Tati
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I vote for the Kakashi and Iruka pairing. Don't ask, but I really see it in this story. He is going to kow about the sharingan... so that's my opinion.
By the way, I am loving this fic.
person charmpit
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay...Naruto with a hoo-haa. Not that far-fetched, have you seen his harem no jutsu in the canon? This is entirely feasible.

You say you can't justify KakaIru in your mind. Well, then think of GaaNeji--they have one thing in common, the fact that Naruto kicked the living shit out of both of them. It's enough to keep them well-paired in yaoi fanfiction (I am not complaining). KakaIru is a similar situation--it's Naruto that joins them, because they both spent a considerable amount of time raising him. It's a bond they have that is only recognized in yaoi fanfiction, but a legitimate bond nevertheless.

Then again, why need a reason? Kakashi-sensei and Iruka-sensei are sexy as hell. For me, that is all that is required.

Okay I'm off my soapbox now. I enjoyed this chapter and am thrilled to find out how Iruka handles Naruto's "heat".
schedule May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey thanks for putting me on your emailing list for when you update, damn that's a nice to receive. Loved the chapter. Man Sasuke was out for . . . blood, no well sort of . . . love, erh kinda . . . pussy, well they are cats . . . anyway he was in for the long haul there. It was great to read. Interesting flashback there for Naruto, poor kitty boy. I got to say I like Shika as a koala, it's neat to have them not always the same as everyone always puts them as in these types of stories; usually Shika is a deer but I can see him as a koala. Welcome Kakashi! He is so funny. Personally I like Kakashi/Iruka. Reasons: I think their personalities make a good match, the time in the anime when they met and didn't fight about Naruto, Kakashi made Iruka blush so that has lead to the yaoi fan-base, Kakashi is such an antagonist for Iruka that their characters seem to work well together, and they look cute together (lol). But in the end I won't complain no matter what you do, even if Kakashi just ends up being a friend or help to Iruka it's your story so follow what you think you can make work the best. But I know a lot of folks love Kakashi/Iruka; yes me too. Man, what is going to happen? Will Iruka be able to keep Naruto away from the others so he doesn't get jumped by Sasuke anymore? Iruka seems to have dealt with this sort of thing; at least from the girls, before so he should have a plan. Question is will it work? Will Sasuke be alright having been throwing into a rut? Will he need something done to calm him down or will he be going around bothering visitors' legs? Even though Sasuke didn't seem too sure what he was doing there he got the love licks in. Lol, here's hoping he does better than my outside tom. I keep flipping his ear cause he has the female down humping the side of her stomach . . . I guess that's why I just got this picture of Sasuke rubbing himself against Naruto and being no where near the target. LOL! It could make for interesting foreplay. Oh, liked how you through in the red eyes there. Does all humanoid pets have the red eyes when they are mating or is it just in Sasuke and Naruto and if so why? Well can't wait to read more from you, keep up the great work and take care.

littleolmee
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person Mizu
schedule April 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It is so cute and great. Hope you write more soon. Awww chouji is sooo cute and naruto too. I cant wait to read the next chapter. ^.^*glomps you*